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Something About You
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 03:40:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There’s something about you that’s different,
He says, after walking over, from afar,
It might be in the way that you dress,
Like a neon punk-rock star,
Or it could be in that smile of yours,
As bewitching as any I’ve seen,
I’ve been waiting for you for all of my life,
Dear girl, where have you been?
Maybe it’s the cut of your hair,
The colour of morning coffee,
Or perhaps it’s in the taste of your kiss,
As sweet as chocolate and toffee,
Okay, I’ll admit it; I haven’t a clue,
Exactly what it is, but there’s something about you.
Copyright ©
Ruby2sdy
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2006-08-31 15:40:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Something About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by jerseysue on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 04:26:59 PM AEST (User
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Very honest down to earth romance. No need for olde worlde script here. This is real life, and totally true. Loved every bit of it. Sue x |
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Re: Something About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:25:05 AM AEST (User
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This was cool. I liked the sassy flow to it. I couldn't help but smile. Great write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Something About You
(User Rating: 1 ) by JGB on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:40:24 PM AEST (User
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Cool.
I like this, a bit weird maybe, but it is as I would say neat, cool.
I like u'r writing.
lol
joanna
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