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If Only
Contributed by
evil_demon
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If only you had felt
The hurt of what you dealt.
You would know how you made me feel
When you said we were not for real.
You would know that I still love you
You would know my wish that won`t come true.
My wish is to still be with you
But now I know that just won`t do.
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evil_demon
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2003-02-12 23:00:00]
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Re: If Only
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:27:24 PM AEST
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| awww. .it always hurts when feelings aren't returned...i like your post though, please continue to write |
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Re: If Only
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:58:06 AM AEST
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| Such a sad feeling to have,very well saids! Christina |
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Re: If Only
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 07:33:57 PM AEST
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I liked this so short yet you express your pain so well. Great poem I hope your post somemore.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: If Only
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 10:47:34 PM AEST
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Another great poem from you, keep writingm i'd love to see some more!
- Becca |
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Re: If Only
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by Kirby on
Thursday, 26th June 2003 @ 11:27:01 AM AEST
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| Love is such a tricky and crappy thing when it leaves. Just think that everything ahppens for a reason and it will all be better in the long run! Love:::Kirby |
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