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Array ( [sid] => 125144 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Before your out [time] => 2006-08-31 11:21:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why is it in life that we always hurt the ones we love? The things we do, the things we say..It almost seems like a necessary must to get through life. Everyone does it, at some point in there life.
Wether it be intentional, or without even realizing it. But we all do it.
Pick your weapon. Drugs? Words? Or even Physical Violence?
We're all guilty. I am.
Is it because were in so much pain, that we want others to hurt right along side us?
Is it out of Anger?
Or are we all just rebelling against the world and ourselves?..
Life is not something to be taken lightly.
Your given it, you live it, and then its over. . You can't stop and rewind this film.
I sometimes think that if life was looked at as something as precious as a crystal ball, us, as human beings would treat it the way it should be treated...Easily broken, and destroyed,... that we would begin to think twice about what we did, think twice about words spoken, and think twice about hurting the ones we love. And realize that this is it, we only get one take. One shot to make it right, so treat it like it could break at any moment.

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Before your out

Contributed by kaylanoelhohn on Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 11:21:53 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Why is it in life that we always hurt the ones we love? The things we do, the things we say..It almost seems like a necessary must to get through life. Everyone does it, at some point in there life.
Wether it be intentional, or without even realizing it. But we all do it.
Pick your weapon. Drugs? Words? Or even Physical Violence?
We're all guilty. I am.
Is it because were in so much pain, that we want others to hurt right along side us?
Is it out of Anger?
Or are we all just rebelling against the world and ourselves?..
Life is not something to be taken lightly.
Your given it, you live it, and then its over. . You can't stop and rewind this film.
I sometimes think that if life was looked at as something as precious as a crystal ball, us, as human beings would treat it the way it should be treated...Easily broken, and destroyed,... that we would begin to think twice about what we did, think twice about words spoken, and think twice about hurting the ones we love. And realize that this is it, we only get one take. One shot to make it right, so treat it like it could break at any moment.





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Re: Before your out (User Rating: 1 )
by Adrianna on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:48:08 AM AEST
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I like the content of it a lot.




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