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Array ( [sid] => 125126 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => with you so far away [time] => 2006-08-31 01:24:15 [hometext] => dedicated to ali ervin the love of my life but am i the love of hers [bodytext] => i live my life right now
with the love so far a way
with the words all stuck inside
the ones i couldnt say
to wish you were here
with me right today
would be the best right now
to survive so far
the question is
only one word thats how
i miss you more than ever
i miss your tender touch
i miss the way you look at me
i miss you verry much
life is hard to live
without you here by me
will you feel the same
i guess ill have to see
with you so far
and me right here
with nothing there to do
but sit down and cry
and just think of nothing but you
with you so far away
with me crying all my tears
when we get back together
ill probley get all my fears
it feels like i lost you
but we both still feel the same
and if you do not
i know im the one to blame
so far away
and all ill see
is you in my myspace
thats were youll be
my last words are i love you
and that is not a lie
if you dont love me
then why cant i just die


by chris troy
aka
emo boi
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 22 [informant] => emoboi4u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
with you so far away

Contributed by emoboi4u on Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 01:24:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



i live my life right now
with the love so far a way
with the words all stuck inside
the ones i couldnt say
to wish you were here
with me right today
would be the best right now
to survive so far
the question is
only one word thats how
i miss you more than ever
i miss your tender touch
i miss the way you look at me
i miss you verry much
life is hard to live
without you here by me
will you feel the same
i guess ill have to see
with you so far
and me right here
with nothing there to do
but sit down and cry
and just think of nothing but you
with you so far away
with me crying all my tears
when we get back together
ill probley get all my fears
it feels like i lost you
but we both still feel the same
and if you do not
i know im the one to blame
so far away
and all ill see
is you in my myspace
thats were youll be
my last words are i love you
and that is not a lie
if you dont love me
then why cant i just die


by chris troy
aka
emo boi




Copyright © emoboi4u ... [ 2006-08-31 01:24:15]
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Re: with you so far away (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 01:59:16 AM AEST
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i feel your pain, nicely written




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