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Array ( [sid] => 125105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happy Times In The Field Are Happening [time] => 2006-08-30 12:43:17 [hometext] => Happy Times In The Field Are Happening by Jock Phillips and for a colleague who I have a feeling will be quite pleased with it. [bodytext] => The field is the same one with the green and sunshine all over the place
Pretty sceneries happen all around
The girl there that was dance frolicking in the pasture grass got hungry one day
She knew what to do
Yeah she ate a peach and liked it too
Wasn't even hungry anymore after eating it and started running all over the pretty scenery again
So much good was happening there that it was almost suffocating for the viewer to behold
It was so good that it basically took the viewer's breath away
Like a jump into a cold water pool fed by mountain spring that is even colder than expected
The viewer jumped in that pool and was similarly awestruck
The peaches are still growing on a lone tree in that field there and the girl eats them as she pleases
The mountain backdrop has some water springs near the mountain bases too
So much good is happening [comments] => 4 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 21 [informant] => JockPhillips [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Happy Times In The Field Are Happening

Contributed by JockPhillips on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 12:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



The field is the same one with the green and sunshine all over the place
Pretty sceneries happen all around
The girl there that was dance frolicking in the pasture grass got hungry one day
She knew what to do
Yeah she ate a peach and liked it too
Wasn't even hungry anymore after eating it and started running all over the pretty scenery again
So much good was happening there that it was almost suffocating for the viewer to behold
It was so good that it basically took the viewer's breath away
Like a jump into a cold water pool fed by mountain spring that is even colder than expected
The viewer jumped in that pool and was similarly awestruck
The peaches are still growing on a lone tree in that field there and the girl eats them as she pleases
The mountain backdrop has some water springs near the mountain bases too
So much good is happening




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Re: Happy Times In The Field Are Happening (User Rating: 1 )
by StormyNites on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 04:24:05 PM AEST
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how beautiful..


Re: Happy Times In The Field Are Happening (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 06:32:48 PM AEST
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So much good is happening here, Jock. I was running right along with her. Great scenery found in my mind's eye. Nice.
Peace, Laura


Re: Happy Times In The Field Are Happening (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 06:41:22 PM AEST
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Didn't like this at all. Found the imagery very basic and uneven in large parts. Didn't ever feel that I was connecting with it. It just seemed basic.


Re: Happy Times In The Field Are Happening (User Rating: 1 )
by True on Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 09:20:23 AM AEST
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I got it even if no one else did. I thought it was awesome, I still say you should write a suicide poem, Ithink it might be amusing to see how it turns out.




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