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Array ( [sid] => 125082 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Feeling So Lost [time] => 2006-08-29 22:35:05 [hometext] => feel free to comment [bodytext] => I feel so lost
I don't know why
I feel so much anger
That i've kept inside
I sometimes feel
I don't know my place
And sometimes think
When I look at my face
Why can no one see what I see?
Why can no one feel what I feel?
What's the point in life?
When there's so many broken hearts to heal
Feeling so lost
Not knowing my place
Feeling so alone
With this big empty space
Inside my heart
Inside my soul
I need someone here
To fill this hole
This feeling's unbearable
This feeling's too much
This feeling's too strong
So I long for your touch
To take this feeling
To heal this fear
For everynight I'm not with you
Nothing seems clear
Now take my hand
And fulfill my soul
Feel the beat of my heart
Since your in control [comments] => 4 [counter] => 394 [topic] => 24 [informant] => sek-c-shaun [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Feeling So Lost

Contributed by sek-c-shaun on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 10:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

I feel so lost
I don't know why
I feel so much anger
That i've kept inside
I sometimes feel
I don't know my place
And sometimes think
When I look at my face
Why can no one see what I see?
Why can no one feel what I feel?
What's the point in life?
When there's so many broken hearts to heal
Feeling so lost
Not knowing my place
Feeling so alone
With this big empty space
Inside my heart
Inside my soul
I need someone here
To fill this hole
This feeling's unbearable
This feeling's too much
This feeling's too strong
So I long for your touch
To take this feeling
To heal this fear
For everynight I'm not with you
Nothing seems clear
Now take my hand
And fulfill my soul
Feel the beat of my heart
Since your in control

Copyright © sek-c-shaun ... [ 2006-08-29 22:35:05]
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Re: Feeling So Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Skillz on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 12:34:21 AM AEST
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a very poignant read..thank you for sharing

Re: Feeling So Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:15:11 PM AEST
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I'n saddened to the core for you...
I think you should remember this person...
But better yourself by forgetting...

The medicine for the soul, is letting it out....
Here's the first step now forget...

Very nice poem... We all know the best poems
come from pain...

Thank You for sharing yours

Re: Feeling So Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 02:05:50 PM AEST
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Wonderful.
I absolutely love it.
Written with great emotion. Great word choice. Great feeling, which I am very familiar with.

I love this line:
"Feel the beat of my heart
Since your in control"

Great job!

Re: Feeling So Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 12:28:24 PM AEST
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This was a good very well written poem.. I liked how you expressed your feelings.. I too have felt this way plenty of times... Great poem... Many people can probably relate...

Take care
christina

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