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[title] => Floating
[time] => 2006-08-29 20:45:09
[hometext] => Brief write on a morn at the pool.
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Laying atop crystal glass waters
floating
floating away
moments seem caught
in each
breath I take
I can hear my respirations
I can hear my blood pumping
in and out of the atriums and ventricles
in a lovely rhythm
I've grown so accustomed too
Lost here
reflections dance across
gray-brown skies
blue sunshine in my eyes
sparkling
twinkling
passively relating to me...life
Life...
In all it's deepest moments
Melding here in liquid glass
Her steady hands hold me
And I'm just floating
floating away
8/28/06
Laura Horner
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Floating
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 08:45:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Laying atop crystal glass waters
floating
floating away
moments seem caught
in each
breath I take
I can hear my respirations
I can hear my blood pumping
in and out of the atriums and ventricles
in a lovely rhythm
I've grown so accustomed too
Lost here
reflections dance across
gray-brown skies
blue sunshine in my eyes
sparkling
twinkling
passively relating to me...life
Life...
In all it's deepest moments
Melding here in liquid glass
Her steady hands hold me
And I'm just floating
floating away
8/28/06
Laura Horner
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2006-08-29 20:45:09]
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Re: Floating
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 08:54:48 PM AEST
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Oh, laura.. a stunning depiction my friend!!
I absolutely adore that last stanza. So dream-like and
beautiful. Dripping with serenity, sis.
Isn't water inspiring? Lovely write DH. Just lovely!!
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Re: Floating
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 11:48:33 AM AEST
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Life afloat, rolling and drifting on calm waters. This seems to set our minds adrift, and our life, the world, seems to take on a very skewed perception....a dreamy state.
Stirs up very pleasant images for me, my friend
Well done, Laura
Will |
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 02:30:30 PM AEST
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| I think I'll go out to my pool..I feel myself warm, and all floaty..great write. |
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Re: Floating
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 01:10:10 AM AEST
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wow this is a very calming poem.. it gave me such a feeling of being relaxed and at peace I really liked the flow of this and an awesome write I love the flow of it too .. great job thansk for sharing
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: Floating
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by Spike on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:59:15 AM AEST
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Soooo relaxing, Laura. I've done this so many times myself but never written about it. Thanks for putting the feelings and sensations on site.
S |
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 06:52:44 PM AEST
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I love the peace in this...that sort of driftingawayfeeling I get from it.
I love the images, too.
Lovely, lovely write. I must visit your page more often.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Floating
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 05:44:01 PM AEST
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I see a moving picture with an almost dream-like quality.. vivid to an extreme-
it's a wonder Laura.. beautifully written~
B |
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Re: Floating
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 02:07:08 AM AEST
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I couldn't have written about what you have if I had tried. Amazing, how different minds are also like water, finding different levels in different terrains or environments. I have a memory of floating like this as a child-I remember being able to hear my pulse, just as you describe. You know, If I hadn't read this, I may have never thought of that moment again. It is a thought from a more peacful time in my life when I did not carry the troubles I do now. Thanks for letting me remember it again Laura.
larkspur. |
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Re: Floating
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 10:41:52 AM AEST
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This is certainly a beautiful and moving post..I enjoyed this write..
honey56 |
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