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Array ( [sid] => 12506 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wait for me Daddy [time] => 2003-02-12 20:00:00 [hometext] => I'm not ready yet... [bodytext] => I'm not ready yet Daddy,
Give me some time there,
Just hold on a while longer, Daddy,
I'll be ready one day.

See, i can't come and find you yet,
you're all the way over in America,
And i'm only 15,
I can't come yet.

I've been thinkin about it, Daddy,
And i know i have to see you before it all goes wrong,
cause i know it will
And i just want to see you again before it does.

So just wait for me, Daddy,
you and your new life,
And your new family,
And your new wife.

I'll be along soon,
And if you don't wanna know,
Then you've been ***** lying to me,
And i don't wana know you.

But if you do,
Then all you gotta do,
Is wait,
Just wait for me, Daddy. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 256 [topic] => 23 [informant] => M [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Wait for me Daddy

Contributed by M on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I'm not ready yet Daddy,
Give me some time there,
Just hold on a while longer, Daddy,
I'll be ready one day.

See, i can't come and find you yet,
you're all the way over in America,
And i'm only 15,
I can't come yet.

I've been thinkin about it, Daddy,
And i know i have to see you before it all goes wrong,
cause i know it will
And i just want to see you again before it does.

So just wait for me, Daddy,
you and your new life,
And your new family,
And your new wife.

I'll be along soon,
And if you don't wanna know,
Then you've been ***** lying to me,
And i don't wana know you.

But if you do,
Then all you gotta do,
Is wait,
Just wait for me, Daddy.

Copyright © M ... [ 2003-02-12 20:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wait for me Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 03:34:52 AM AEST
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i hope you get to see him and i hope everything works out...best of luck to you

Re: Wait for me Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:53:04 AM AEST
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AAWW I hope you will meet him again soon,Beautifully done! Christina

Re: Wait for me Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:21:23 PM AEST
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M
A real poem of our time. This message should be shouted for everyone to hear..
I've been married 49 years (three grandaughters) I write about a happy family
John, Jill, Luke,Matthew, and Jemma.
That's how it shoild be .
But today people are made of straw, don't know how, got nothing to offer.and it's much harder.
Great poem. I'll try and do the rest that you have written.

Re: Wait for me Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 07:19:49 PM AEST
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Written from your heart I can see that. Very touching I hope things work out for ya!

Your friend,
Joel

Re: Wait for me Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 13th June 2003 @ 10:56:30 AM AEST
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i like this and keep up the good work

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