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[title] => There’s something I think you should know
[time] => 2003-02-12 18:20:00
[hometext] => wrote last night thinking about every thing and all i could have dont and cried when i wrote it cause im having a bad week
[bodytext] => I cry to hear, I cry when theirs something I want to tell you but I fear rejection, I know I’m greedy I know I only want, I’m sorry I just sit on my a**, I know I could change but I don’t theirs a reason to try, I only want to be happy, out of debts of solitude, I cant stand my pain and sadness if only I knew where to turn to, I’ve lost the will for happiness that I don’t even know what its like to live one day happy without wanting to cry, I still have darkening thoughts but I’ve done nothing to change my energy is low since I’m griped by this unknown person its depression who’s causing me to see every thing negative, I want to change I need to change but I cant seen to get the courage to try when I haven’t found a reason to prove myself and I don’t feel It will come any time soon, Many think i’m lazy but I cant explain but if only you could listen and know that you wont reject me, I am confusing my thoughts, distorted, a life of guilt a life of pain a loss of a loved one, I’ve changes since that death happened, a new face is within me which can see no change every things blurry wondering if theirs anything to hope for, if only I could free the life which is taken, I want to be free happy, with hope with out pain, if only soon I could look up and see what the point of this life achievements of my mine so few I cant remember since the pain is all I can feel, if only their was a door I could unlock which leads to my future , theirs something I think you should know but all you have to do I listen and I might be freed by the beast
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There’s something I think you should know
Contributed by
vinnie731
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cry to hear, I cry when theirs something I want to tell you but I fear rejection, I know I’m greedy I know I only want, I’m sorry I just sit on my a**, I know I could change but I don’t theirs a reason to try, I only want to be happy, out of debts of solitude, I cant stand my pain and sadness if only I knew where to turn to, I’ve lost the will for happiness that I don’t even know what its like to live one day happy without wanting to cry, I still have darkening thoughts but I’ve done nothing to change my energy is low since I’m griped by this unknown person its depression who’s causing me to see every thing negative, I want to change I need to change but I cant seen to get the courage to try when I haven’t found a reason to prove myself and I don’t feel It will come any time soon, Many think i’m lazy but I cant explain but if only you could listen and know that you wont reject me, I am confusing my thoughts, distorted, a life of guilt a life of pain a loss of a loved one, I’ve changes since that death happened, a new face is within me which can see no change every things blurry wondering if theirs anything to hope for, if only I could free the life which is taken, I want to be free happy, with hope with out pain, if only soon I could look up and see what the point of this life achievements of my mine so few I cant remember since the pain is all I can feel, if only their was a door I could unlock which leads to my future , theirs something I think you should know but all you have to do I listen and I might be freed by the beast
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Re: There’s something I think you should know
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:46:27 AM AEST
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| Vinnie I know now that you feel this pain,but someday you will find happiness,If you need to talk to someone I'm here! You being a teen is a tough thing to go through but it wont always be this way,Great write! Christina |
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Re: There’s something I think you should know
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 01:36:12 PM AEST
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Depression sucks. Having someone to listen helps, though. Life has its ups and downs, and you can't give in to the downs because then you'll miss the ups, and trust me, they're worth waiting for. Just keep holding on and don't lose hope. You'll be fine. :)
~ Moonlit Angel |
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