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[aid] => mick
[title] => The Deepest Puddle
[time] => 2006-08-28 08:39:47
[hometext] => its not really my genra...just thaught i might give it a try.. comments/advise are always welcome! : )
[bodytext] => there is this puddle its the deepest puddle on the earth my friend fell through this giant puddle came up and said, "come on down" i thaught a moment and imagined it this massive place, where people love under water, there are fish, kids, and happly little clams bubbles, bubbles, and more bubbles, the deepest puddle in the universe full of love and joy where everyone is happy, never in a bad mood my friend said, "well come on" so i dove strait in and conked my head on the pavment my friends all laughed "but," i said "its the deepest puddle, why, why did i conk my head?" my friend in the puddle said, "cuz im in the way." so he swam, swam way way down, so this time i thaught, well maybe i will just tip toe in, but the i fell, fell way way down i looked around, saw my friend and said "hi" i looked up and down found the puddle, just a wee little light poked through the puddle amazingly i could talk, swim, and play. there were fish, kids, and silly little clams! i was right! i was right! me and my friend finaly climbed out of the puddle then wanted back in, we jumped, and jumped, and jumped on the puddle but it was just pavment down there so every day sense then we've jumped on that very puddle, just trying to get back in [comments] => 5 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 5 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChildrensPoetry )
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