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Array ( [sid] => 125004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sex [time] => 2006-08-28 08:38:44 [hometext] => Im sure the title and the topic don't make sence right now. BUT when the poem is read, you'll understand. -Trini [bodytext] => Sex
That unbearable torture
That drives you
Pushes you for more
For lack of breath
A carnal desire of pleasure
To drown out the world with heartbeats
A constant breathing of two
Sometimes a desirable vision upon others
But torture for me
Because I long for it so
Attempting to hold back
I close my eyes,
And try to forget that we’re kissing
Soon failing at my attempt
Slowly walls begin to cave
My refuge melts down
My torment will begin
Followed by,
My suicide between the legs

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Sex

Contributed by trini on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 08:38:44 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Sex
That unbearable torture
That drives you
Pushes you for more
For lack of breath
A carnal desire of pleasure
To drown out the world with heartbeats
A constant breathing of two
Sometimes a desirable vision upon others
But torture for me
Because I long for it so
Attempting to hold back
I close my eyes,
And try to forget that we’re kissing
Soon failing at my attempt
Slowly walls begin to cave
My refuge melts down
My torment will begin
Followed by,
My suicide between the legs





Copyright © trini ... [ 2006-08-28 08:38:44]
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Re: Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by MsCrys on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:51:11 PM AEST
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Been there myself. I think we all have in one way or another. Good job :)


Re: Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 01:21:17 PM AEST
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im liking this one! yes mscrys, we have all been there at one point or another! wicked write,

2sdyx


Re: Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 05:40:39 PM AEST
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Very sad but true write.
I quit.
Huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 05:58:25 PM AEST
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I feel a little im a virgin but that doesn't mean i dont know what u talkin bout. look jus keep it real


Re: Sex (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:39:22 PM AEST
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I think in a way all of us have been there.. This is a very truthful... I have been feeling this way lately...

Take care
Christina




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