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Eternal Kiss..
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 10:23:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your lingering kiss, feels like fire,
your caress's fill me with desire,
as our bodies move in perfect time,
feel our souls are entwined,
You bring me to the height of passion,
leave me filled with satisfaction,
every touch, I can feel,
yet im not sure that your real,
is each magical sensation,
a figment of imagination
as I yield to your finger tips,
I see my blood upon your lips,
Every time you come to me,
I seem to lose reality,
good night my lover of perfection,
who in the mirror, has no reflection,
I know that soon you'll take me to,
live eternally with you...
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2006-08-26 10:23:05]
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 10:55:27 AM AEST
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Very very good write! But ...
A Vampirequeen ya ain't quite yet
but ya did real fine to build the set!
Enjoyed!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 11:01:33 AM AEST
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| They lay a rose upon my chest, I heard them softly cry.........................nice one lillyjane |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:11:54 PM AEST
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Very passionate, and sensual. I really like the way it flows, and how it just pieces together so nicely. The description and metaphors are a wonderful touch as well. Very well written, and I enjoyed reading.
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by twbanter on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:49:13 PM AEST
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Only a women could write that. (He, he) Though as a man, I wish I was him. How good would THAT be? No reflection, timeless dames filled with eroneous passion for me, simply because I'm dead? Does it get any better than that? (guess I'll find out one day...) Delightfull, and well writen.
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by shelby on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:06:12 PM AEST
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Welcome to the vampire mistress fold, mahhhhhh ha ha ha.
This is incredible keep with it I loved it
Michelle |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by Bound on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:46:01 PM AEST
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| It flows really well, and for just a try I think you've done a great job. |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 05:48:59 PM AEST
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| Wow this is really good. You should write more dark poetry. Great write |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 02:43:05 AM AEST
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| This may be dark, but it also has a sensual , romantic feel about it. I loved it. Suex |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 02:01:05 PM AEST
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Very nice very nice indeed.
lol hehehehe welcome to the dark side
hugs |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 03:02:10 PM AEST
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| Wow! Fantastic write Lilyjane, made me hope he comes to me tonight! |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by rdv1960 on
Monday, 11th September 2006 @ 12:09:06 PM AEST
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A touchy one, Lillyjane, hot and in layers of enjoyment.
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by maestar on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:22:09 AM AEST
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| very good. creepy |
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Re: Eternal Kiss..
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by maggot on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 09:15:30 AM AEST
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hey, nice peom, it was a good read.
not only is it dark its also sensual and romantic.
you should write more dark poetry.
take care
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