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Array ( [sid] => 124918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleed to death [time] => 2006-08-26 01:40:19 [hometext] => (straight off the top of my head..my minds emotions) [bodytext] => Choking back the words
I scream as if
afraid that he
might hurt me
my eyes are so intense
but bleed nonstop
and tears continue
to trickle out
like the words you
use to break my heart,
to bend my body,
like a soul ripped inward and
I'm nothing
nothing but sick
inside
my pulp exposed
and shone naked
like those chilling
breaths you
take in
order to say
that my cries
are useless and
unborn to this night
where I sleep in
the backseat,
strapped into an
elusive memory..

You knew I'd bleed to death. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Inevitable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Bleed to death

Contributed by Inevitable on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:40:19 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Choking back the words
I scream as if
afraid that he
might hurt me
my eyes are so intense
but bleed nonstop
and tears continue
to trickle out
like the words you
use to break my heart,
to bend my body,
like a soul ripped inward and
I'm nothing
nothing but sick
inside
my pulp exposed
and shone naked
like those chilling
breaths you
take in
order to say
that my cries
are useless and
unborn to this night
where I sleep in
the backseat,
strapped into an
elusive memory..

You knew I'd bleed to death.

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2006-08-26 01:40:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bleed to death (User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 07:19:28 AM AEST
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Wow, I feel te pain.... Ouch

Tom W

Re: Bleed to death (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:10:51 AM AEST
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awesome, i love this! the imagery and metaphors are awesome, and it flows really well, great write!

2sdyx

Re: Bleed to death (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 09:48:07 AM AEST
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excruiciating

That last line is severe!! Very emotional and
gripping piece throughout. Excellent descriptions ..

~Breezy

Re: Bleed to death (User Rating: 1 )
by Bound on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
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Wow....just wow

Re: Bleed to death (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 01:18:44 AM AEST
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Wow you show such emotion that I feel it too..you are an awesome writer

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