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Array ( [sid] => 124896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => (Title Deleted) or I Think An Apology Is In Order [time] => 2006-08-25 13:54:52 [hometext] => I think I may have offended some people and I wrote this poem song from my heart out you all out there. (Title Deleted) or I Think An Apology Is In Order by Jock Phillips [bodytext] => Ba boom Ba boom
Drum heart or other beating mechanism
Or thousands of them
Dandelion in your face Jock Phillips
Mud on your face neck or expensive pants suit
All pulling at your heart strings
Or hitting at the heart strings with vitriol
Hard enough to break them maybe
Look over in that poetry writing building lot there
Wrecking ball edits tearing down structurally sound poem song buildings constructed with bricks of good and other materials
Laugh it up like a funny comedy movie that makes you laugh
Remember in the morning though
When the mist fog rises over the mountain field
The rose petal sky looks like something red
And a soft glow paints the ground a color
Will Jock Phillips be sitting there wishing he were dead?
No
Jock Phillips is just sitting with a heart stamp on his heart there
Taking in the good there or elsewhere
Probably laughing at a funny movie flick or something else that's funny too
Or maybe writing up more good poem songs
The good is still happening somewhere and probably in multiple places
And a pretty girl with ribbons and bows still dances in a field under mountain sunrise light [comments] => 3 [counter] => 269 [topic] => 50 [informant] => JockPhillips [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
(Title Deleted) or I Think An Apology Is In Order

Contributed by JockPhillips on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:54:52 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



Ba boom Ba boom
Drum heart or other beating mechanism
Or thousands of them
Dandelion in your face Jock Phillips
Mud on your face neck or expensive pants suit
All pulling at your heart strings
Or hitting at the heart strings with vitriol
Hard enough to break them maybe
Look over in that poetry writing building lot there
Wrecking ball edits tearing down structurally sound poem song buildings constructed with bricks of good and other materials
Laugh it up like a funny comedy movie that makes you laugh
Remember in the morning though
When the mist fog rises over the mountain field
The rose petal sky looks like something red
And a soft glow paints the ground a color
Will Jock Phillips be sitting there wishing he were dead?
No
Jock Phillips is just sitting with a heart stamp on his heart there
Taking in the good there or elsewhere
Probably laughing at a funny movie flick or something else that's funny too
Or maybe writing up more good poem songs
The good is still happening somewhere and probably in multiple places
And a pretty girl with ribbons and bows still dances in a field under mountain sunrise light




Copyright © JockPhillips ... [ 2006-08-25 13:54:52]
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Re: (Title Deleted) or I Think An Apology Is In Order (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 08:59:44 PM AEST
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.............that was an apology? sounded more like a bunch of meaningless metaphors jumped together. but, you know, as you've said in a previous write....."his poetry (meaning yours) is too good to be appreciated by the likes of you". that makes me laugh, as does today's poem.


Re: (Title Deleted) or I Think An Apology Is In Order (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:30:54 AM AEST
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What wuz zat?
Don't know bout your other writes but this is good writing.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: (Title Deleted) or I Think An Apology Is In Order (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:12:13 PM AEST
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This poem was ok but it was a little hard to follow




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