|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Sick and twisted existence
Contributed by
silent
on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 08:10:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
The sweet sharp blade rests underneath black coat
Fixated on your sweet little throat
Waiting for the beast inside to arise
Stalking dark streets, roaring fire, your demise
Intense hatred begins to feel
Delusions feed my mind, so frighteningly unreal
Pulling hair, twisting around to a cold, blank stare
Freezing panic, standing face to face, fear laid bare
Glimmering blade shines above white flesh
Slicing through tenderness, minds all a mess
Nights air so cold, hate and pain all I remember
Red spills before my eyes, it’s December
Voices settle as you drop under my grip
Coughing, vomiting, pumping my release, with every drip
The next victim in my mind
Not knowing when just biding time..
Copyright ©
silent
... [
2006-08-24 20:10:36] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Sick and twisted existence
(User Rating: 1 ) by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 09:34:03 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
creepy.....absolutely brilliant. fantastic write, loved it.
--talli |
|
|
Re: Sick and twisted existence
(User Rating: 1 ) by MidnightPunkCat on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 07:25:46 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem Intrigued my inner dark mind locked up.. surely brilliant and i hope to read more of your work |
|
|
Re: Sick and twisted existence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bound on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:51:31 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You are a genius. This is so well written!! Beautiful. |
|
|
|