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[title] => Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
[time] => 2006-08-24 11:42:41
[hometext] => A gift poem by Jock Phillips about how his poetry is too good to be appreciated by the likes of you.
[bodytext] => Dandelions sunrise flowers and plants
Describing pretty sceneries for the enjoying
Life and poem songs so good it hurts
Look a cloud there in a blue sky
Field here and forest there with trees and birds and such
Other plants
Colors all over the place
Pretty scenery and doing good
Not everyone is knowing of good when they see it
Jock Phillips is complimented and encouraged by the lack of appreciation for his poems by the likes of you
Flying your kite in that field there
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Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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JockPhillips
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Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 11:42:41 AM in AEST
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Dandelions sunrise flowers and plants
Describing pretty sceneries for the enjoying
Life and poem songs so good it hurts
Look a cloud there in a blue sky
Field here and forest there with trees and birds and such
Other plants
Colors all over the place
Pretty scenery and doing good
Not everyone is knowing of good when they see it
Jock Phillips is complimented and encouraged by the lack of appreciation for his poems by the likes of you
Flying your kite in that field there
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JockPhillips
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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your flow isnt very good, and thats pretty much essential for what i think you're trying to do here but the poem has nice metphors. needs work but keep it up.
xXx
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 12:21:01 PM AEST
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I can't help but comment.....which is exactly what you seem to be constantly fishing for. You sound so full of yourself. Confidence is good, but really, this poem lacks substance. It seems childish and arrogant in manor. If you want to check out some excellent poetry here...read Silent No More, or Breezy, Man on High, Timotheus, Lost In Myself, Ken Moore, Larkspur...just a few I can think of. These folks are poets in the true form. No need to ask folks to read or comment on them. I have read other pieces of your poetry. I didn't comment because usually if I've nothing good or nice to say....I refrain from the comment. I think if you continue with your writing, in time it will come together for you. Your approach for getting readers is lacking.
I wish you well.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by alasdaircairns on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 12:24:39 PM AEST
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| Sometimes you won't get comments cos you post at a quiet time. Several of my poems have under 10 reads and no comments but I don't cry about it! Instead I try and write another good poem. Funny title though-it made me read it and now you've got 3 comments!!! Just not sure about the poor me emo approach on a friendly poetry site.... |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by shelby on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 02:22:17 PM AEST
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When your new here it takes awhile to be discovered. By being rude to others isnt the way to be welcomed into the fold. Once its seen people tend to stay away from it. It also helps to get out and comment on others works as well. I appreciate all the nature you have brought to life in this write. That is good.
Michelle |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 02:25:17 PM AEST
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| *claps*. should we throw a parade for ya, Jock? you've actually got 6 comments now! no more complaining about it, huh? except that, ya know, one of those is for you, 2 or 3 aren't saying anything good about, 1 of them is skeptic about your ability to write, and this one, is being just plain sarcastic. so you know, you can keep writing about the same things on and on, continue your personal attacks, but like shelby said, you won't last here long. and i'm afraid...people won't be too sad to see you leave. so good luck. |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by Ruby2sdy on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 02:52:02 PM AEST
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Well looks like i'm givin you your 7th comment. As an english student, I'm going to say your lack of punctuation makes this a rather difficult read, and, before even reading the poem i'm swayed to have a lack of empathy for the writer, something which is essential when reading and identifying with good writing, you alienate your potential audience, and, just a thought, could lack of appreciation come from a lack of talent?
A rather peeved tuesday |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:41:25 AM AEST
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Well,I think your writing is good. It's like u write in riddles.
Call me nuts but it make sense to me.
keep writing.
Smiles,
emy |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by twbanter on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 06:52:15 AM AEST
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| Nice try Jack. One can't simply throw together a wad of miscelaneous observation and reflections, and call it poetry. There needs to be (somewhere in there,) a harmonious point to it all. Or perhaps, I'm simply not sophisticated enough for you. |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by brew on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 08:07:36 PM AEST
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Well personally, I like the write, ..yet, I havent concluded if I like YOU. Seems, you take simple and make it understood, yet, why bash your self, or anything, about it?! And ,may I ask, why the 3rd person referal? Am i missing something. ?!!!! I write, a lil like you, but I DO NOT ask for reconition......if it gets read, be it, if not.......*shrugs* I agree start reading others, and comment for them as well.! Just a straight forward, female here..even mean, most the time......
Brew~ |
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Re: Probably The Best or My Poetry Is Too Advanced To Be Appreciated Here
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by True on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 11:18:04 PM AEST
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| Don't listen to them, they're just cynical because 99% of the poetry being written today has been done and redone and you're at least doing something new. One major point in human nature is that they don't like change. I like your poetry. But then again I have a sense of humor and find the mocking overtones (maybe overtomes is too mild a word) to your poetry amusing. I hope you don't leave the site, I think I would miss you. |
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