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Never before have I faced such numbing obscurity,
The thunder clouds are formed out along the bay,
the darkness in my heart will not leave today.

I roll with the pointlessness of existing in this way
each ticking second that scratches by gnaws my soul away.
The path I'm on right now is swallowed by the black,
up ahead there's nothing but worse I can't go back.

Each new day that dawns is the same as the last
there's nothing here but emptiness as I move further down the path.
Where are all the people that I used to know?
Why aren't they walking with me, where did they all go?
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Dark

Contributed by Sorrow86 on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:19:18 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

This sensation that I'm feeling is something new for me,
Never before have I faced such numbing obscurity,
The thunder clouds are formed out along the bay,
the darkness in my heart will not leave today.

I roll with the pointlessness of existing in this way
each ticking second that scratches by gnaws my soul away.
The path I'm on right now is swallowed by the black,
up ahead there's nothing but worse I can't go back.

Each new day that dawns is the same as the last
there's nothing here but emptiness as I move further down the path.
Where are all the people that I used to know?
Why aren't they walking with me, where did they all go?

Copyright © Sorrow86 ... [ 2006-08-24 10:19:18]
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Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Angel16 on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 11:07:56 AM AEST
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*Wow~very good poem, Sorrow86.

Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 06:11:01 PM AEST
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very nice piece, we seem to lose so many in our life, whether it be through death or just apathy... very true,

2sdyx

Re: Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by spanky on Tuesday, 6th January 2009 @ 09:36:07 AM AEST
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Well-written. I'm interpreting this poem as a statement about chronic unrelenting depression. A very dark place to be...always looking for a glimmer of hope at the end of a long dark tunnel.

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