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Array ( [sid] => 124838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Little Feather [time] => 2006-08-24 10:17:24 [hometext] => Life goes on... Nothing stays forever, cherish every moment with your loved ones, afterall life really is a beautiful gift given to us by God:) [bodytext] => My Little Feather


Little feather… you breeze past me in the autumn weather,
Singing a song of a soul so free,
risisng above my orange tree.
I see you fret, elated to touch the crimson, lest it set,
I see you glide, like a bird on its very first ride...
A melonchony fills my heart,
that cherishes the memories you leave behind,
as you cruise into the far away land…
I wished to hold you close,oh! Little feather....
As you rose and soared above my orange grove,
But I knew the time had come for you to go…
I said goodbye as a tear rolled past my eye,
But a wind came by and wept it dry, and
whispered to me that,
My little feather, now divine,will always be mine and,
My heart sings to you everyday and says…
Oh! Little feather… as you breeze past me in the autumn weather.

- Jaan
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Little Feather

Contributed by jaan on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:17:24 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



My Little Feather


Little feather… you breeze past me in the autumn weather,
Singing a song of a soul so free,
risisng above my orange tree.
I see you fret, elated to touch the crimson, lest it set,
I see you glide, like a bird on its very first ride...
A melonchony fills my heart,
that cherishes the memories you leave behind,
as you cruise into the far away land…
I wished to hold you close,oh! Little feather....
As you rose and soared above my orange grove,
But I knew the time had come for you to go…
I said goodbye as a tear rolled past my eye,
But a wind came by and wept it dry, and
whispered to me that,
My little feather, now divine,will always be mine and,
My heart sings to you everyday and says…
Oh! Little feather… as you breeze past me in the autumn weather.

- Jaan




Copyright © jaan ... [ 2006-08-24 10:17:24]
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Re: Little Feather (User Rating: 1 )
by Syloss on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 03:35:17 PM AEST
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Thank you sooooo much Jaan. This was a quazar among little stars.


Re: Little Feather (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Saturday, 27th December 2008 @ 06:58:41 PM AEST
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you work well with words.

i liked this:

a tear rolled past my eye,
but a wind came by and wept it dry, and...

and this:

now divine will always be mine...


the way you played with rhyme, without making it sound sing-song and amatuer. Very nice.


Re: Little Feather (User Rating: 1 )
by kismetkills on Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 08:55:33 PM AEST
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that's soo prettyful!
:]




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