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Life seems to go on by and it feels like I’m not even a live
Everyday I go on feeling unfilled within
Everybody around me is ecstatic, I shed tears instead
Life always seemed so tough
Knowing deep down it's rough

Feeling like I’m the last one standing
Misery is where I’ll be landing
Dreaming of death
Hoping this is my last breathe
Don't cry if you don't see me anymore
Because I’ll be gone anytime

I been holding on for far to long
Now it's time to go on
Someday somewhere I’ll see you for a second time
Wishing someone can realize what I’m going through
Everyday I go on, but life isn't the same
Trying to face the pain
But I'm MISSING YOU
Living without you has killed me inside
I have to face reality in time
Only god will know why
But for now I will tell you Goodbye
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~*~ In Time I'll Be Gone ~*~

Contributed by Butterfly_Love on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:38:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It feels like moments in time has distorted so have I
Life seems to go on by and it feels like I’m not even a live
Everyday I go on feeling unfilled within
Everybody around me is ecstatic, I shed tears instead
Life always seemed so tough
Knowing deep down it's rough

Feeling like I’m the last one standing
Misery is where I’ll be landing
Dreaming of death
Hoping this is my last breathe
Don't cry if you don't see me anymore
Because I’ll be gone anytime

I been holding on for far to long
Now it's time to go on
Someday somewhere I’ll see you for a second time
Wishing someone can realize what I’m going through
Everyday I go on, but life isn't the same
Trying to face the pain
But I'm MISSING YOU
Living without you has killed me inside
I have to face reality in time
Only god will know why
But for now I will tell you Goodbye

Copyright Â© Butterfly_Love ... [ 2006-08-23 22:38:44]
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Re: ~*~ In Time I'll Be Gone ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by midnight_writer on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:13:22 AM AEST
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very sad :(
but written beautifully :)

midnight~amaya

Re: ~*~ In Time I'll Be Gone ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 01:39:19 PM AEST
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My girlfriend is off to Uni next month, at which point we've agreed to split for distance's sake. I know tthis is EXACTLY how I'll feel when she's gone. So, so sad yet brilliant.

Re: ~*~ In Time I'll Be Gone ~*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 05:18:13 PM AEST
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in time we'll all be gone, and this is a lvoely (if very sad) write, goodbye seems to be the hardest and the longest word, thanks for sharing,

tuesdayx

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