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A time with no end
A place where pain lasts an eternity
Forever
The time when you finally realize
life isn't a game
The people you love and care about will leave
Fantasies play over and over again in your head
but non will come true
Just your imagination
letting you forget
never truely letting you
let go
You just feel your heart
everyday every second
slowly crushing itself
This is what forever does
it lasts forever
Makes you realize the people you want most
are gone forever [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => lil_pup91 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Forever a land of Fantasies

Contributed by lil_pup91 on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:20:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Forever
A time with no end
A place where pain lasts an eternity
Forever
The time when you finally realize
life isn't a game
The people you love and care about will leave
Fantasies play over and over again in your head
but non will come true
Just your imagination
letting you forget
never truely letting you
let go
You just feel your heart
everyday every second
slowly crushing itself
This is what forever does
it lasts forever
Makes you realize the people you want most
are gone forever

Copyright © lil_pup91 ... [ 2006-08-23 22:20:35]
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Re: Forever a land of Fantasies (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 10:22:16 PM AEST
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dude, you haven't had a very good today have you? good poem though, aint that the truth.

--talli

Re: Forever a land of Fantasies (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 04:58:58 AM AEST
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Reminds me of a quote I heard a very wise person say...

"poetry is what squeezes out of you
when you've been squashed by Life, like a bug"

Re: Forever a land of Fantasies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st December 2008 @ 10:06:46 PM AEST
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This is both beautiful and agonizingly truthful. I can totally relate to this!Excellent write!

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