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Array ( [sid] => 124807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => RACHAEL [time] => 2006-08-23 14:17:47 [hometext] => this poem is about my cousin, i miss her and love her so much. she has made many mistakes in her life, but 1 of her biggest mistakes is the most beautiful of all & it seems like angels were sent 2 her to help her & help take care of her beautiful mistake. [bodytext] => i love you
i always have and always will
youve made so many stupid mistakes

you had a baby at age 19
you moved so far from home
left us without a goodbye
to louisiana
with your boyfriend
we know so little about
but we know he is good
you joined the army at 20

who knows when we will be able to see each other again
eveyone prays that you will be safe
so far away

i miss you
i love you
i hope the army dose you good
you were slightly confused
headed in the wrong direction
i hope you get this all figured out

your son is cute
he's only seen you a few times
he loves you, i can tell in the pictures
he knows your his real mommy
but he is with wonderful people that love him
it seems they are angels sent to you from heaven
to take care of your baby while you get this figured out

i love you
i always have and always will
youve made so many mistakes

you had a baby at age 19
and you joined the army at 20
you dropped out of school
you left without a goodbye
you never called, we all were worried
you were slightly confused
and headed in the wrong direction
i hope you get this all worked out
and i hope the army dose you good

i love you and miss you
i wish i was with you
because i miss you

i know we didnt always get along
but your my cousin
i will always love you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 65 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
RACHAEL

Contributed by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:17:47 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



i love you
i always have and always will
youve made so many stupid mistakes

you had a baby at age 19
you moved so far from home
left us without a goodbye
to louisiana
with your boyfriend
we know so little about
but we know he is good
you joined the army at 20

who knows when we will be able to see each other again
eveyone prays that you will be safe
so far away

i miss you
i love you
i hope the army dose you good
you were slightly confused
headed in the wrong direction
i hope you get this all figured out

your son is cute
he's only seen you a few times
he loves you, i can tell in the pictures
he knows your his real mommy
but he is with wonderful people that love him
it seems they are angels sent to you from heaven
to take care of your baby while you get this figured out

i love you
i always have and always will
youve made so many mistakes

you had a baby at age 19
and you joined the army at 20
you dropped out of school
you left without a goodbye
you never called, we all were worried
you were slightly confused
and headed in the wrong direction
i hope you get this all worked out
and i hope the army dose you good

i love you and miss you
i wish i was with you
because i miss you

i know we didnt always get along
but your my cousin
i will always love you




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Re: RACHAEL (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:52:27 PM AEST
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awww, this is so sweet. i hope your cousins gets to read this.

- Bethani -


Re: RACHAEL (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:24:18 PM AEST
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Very sweet even tho it's sad.
I hope you hear something good from your cousin very soon.
Just say a prayer for her safety.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: RACHAEL (User Rating: 1 )
by TheLostPuppet on Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:53:28 PM AEST
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hey jess, hope you get to see your cousin some time soon.
TheLostPuppet


Re: RACHAEL (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 08:41:53 AM AEST
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hey ppl thanks for the comments, just wanna say i finally got to talk to my cousin, shes all good and hopfully she will be able to come to oregon before she leaves for training!




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