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[aid] => mick
[title] => WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
[time] => 2006-08-22 19:49:45
[hometext] => My grand daughter was upset
[bodytext] =>
Cleansing is our inner sorrow
Melting hardness of inner core.
Hold on to deep luv 'till it's over.
Keep your soul free for evermore.
When it all tumbles down
Making you weep in pain
Let them tears flow rivers
Now, just rise in-luv again!
Your sensitive compassion grows
Forgiveness to all is cultivated, hon.
In time their inner healing
Will grow to shame for what they done.
Mammaw can see your heart
Knowing your goodness is strong.
You're an example to all peers.
Smile sweetie, your luv over comes wrong.
You were born our angel to Earth.
Always joy since you came.
You came to teach compassion.
You'll always smile after pain.
[comments] => 19
[counter] => 386
[topic] => 55
[informant] => emystar
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => dedicatedpoems
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WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
Contributed by
emystar
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Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 07:49:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Cleansing is our inner sorrow
Melting hardness of inner core.
Hold on to deep luv 'till it's over.
Keep your soul free for evermore.
When it all tumbles down
Making you weep in pain
Let them tears flow rivers
Now, just rise in-luv again!
Your sensitive compassion grows
Forgiveness to all is cultivated, hon.
In time their inner healing
Will grow to shame for what they done.
Mammaw can see your heart
Knowing your goodness is strong.
You're an example to all peers.
Smile sweetie, your luv over comes wrong.
You were born our angel to Earth.
Always joy since you came.
You came to teach compassion.
You'll always smile after pain.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2006-08-22 19:49:45]
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:11:21 PM AEST
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Yup, I was smiling with light heart after the smileys and smiling with warmth at the wisdom with which you presented this to your grand daughter after I read it. What a lucky gal she is! This was superb!!!!
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 09:23:56 PM AEST
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The smileys are adorable and this is such a tender work. Your love for her shines in this write.
Michelle |
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 09:41:06 PM AEST
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I'm with Ken, Hun. Still smiling as a matter of fact ... and likely will fer a bit !!!
Thanks Emy, I needed that !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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by trini on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 09:53:28 PM AEST
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aww this caought me off gaurd.
i really apricated it, i needed a good smile
and the poem knocked me off my feet as most of yours do.
-trini |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 10:09:01 PM AEST
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your grand daughter is so lucky to have you
Emy you are a star...... |
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 10:14:51 PM AEST
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..very lovable my friend..lol
your grandaughter is fortunate to have you-
I know she giggled a bit at that animated smiley!! The work was quaint and most beautiful Emy..
Bless her..and you~
B |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 04:58:59 AM AEST
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You always seem to know how to brighten up someone’s day with a smile. You know they say if we were to smile more there would be less stress and heartache in our lives. Great job! Many blessings to you and yours.
sadaddy |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 09:37:19 AM AEST
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you always find a way to make people smile =]
as always, this is a great write. keep up the fantastic work emy!!
~*Jess*~ |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:30:44 PM AEST
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This certainly made me smile, seeing all those smilies.
Your poem is beautiful, you have brightened my day, with these words. Sue x
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 03:41:04 PM AEST
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| Haha Emy fantastic, loved it.. xxx |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 06:59:04 PM AEST
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Emy, this was so touching!! And yes, definitely smile inducing!
I reiterate the sentiments of others who have said, your granddaughter is
lucky to have you. She is. As are all of us. *hugs* : )
Beautiful words, my friend .. from a most beautiful heart.
~Breezy |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by Lilly-Quill on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 04:44:21 PM AEST
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Oh my, what a legacy, what a tribute, and oh what a masterful masterpiece to boot.
Emystar~, what a clever lady you are; and what a fortunate granddaughter~ to have you and your creative wit and charm.
Deeply appreciative,
~LillyQuill |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 12:35:36 PM AEST
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Emy U R THE BEST
THANX 4 SHARING |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by jmakuer on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:01:45 AM AEST
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| am truly feeling this, this is golden, and i admire your work, thanks though for comments you made on my last piece, i truly appreciate that, good looking though, am barely here, so i appologized that it took so long to respond to you or even comment on your work. job well done here. love it |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by Rose on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 07:52:45 AM AEST
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oh so dear you are Emy. You always find ways to help all people. Making them smile is one of them. You are such a dear and wonderful person. Amber Rose :)
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:29:44 AM AEST
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lol you certainly made me smile.
great job on this one Emy
hugs
k |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by topcatcrowther on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 04:30:44 AM AEST
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| i love this peom. well done |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 17th September 2006 @ 10:16:39 PM AEST
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That Had Kind Of A Melody To It ! I Really Thought That It Was Really Sweet Too !! It Ran So Smooth & Was So In Touch As I Read It !!! Very Nice !!!!
DAN !!!!! |
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Re: WHEN IT ALL TUMBLES
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by priss on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 11:44:45 PM AEST
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| truly beautiful and beautifully true. love it! |
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