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in a state of dispare
for the ones around me
don't really care.
they see only air
not a body or even a soul
no hope for happieness
among the untold
of days yet to come

Fearful of these surroundings
unable to breath
looking inside me
for who I am and wish to be
you see my delema
and don't understand why
that i can't wait
till the day I
die! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 32 [informant] => crazy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

die

Contributed by crazy on Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 11:49:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Lonesomly I walk
in a state of dispare
for the ones around me
don't really care.
they see only air
not a body or even a soul
no hope for happieness
among the untold
of days yet to come

Fearful of these surroundings
unable to breath
looking inside me
for who I am and wish to be
you see my delema
and don't understand why
that i can't wait
till the day I
die!

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2006-08-22 11:49:00]
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Re: die (User Rating: 1 )
by LifeFadingAway on Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:50:44 PM AEST
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I used to feel the same way at school, but now I go to a really small school with only 40 people and everyone knows eachother there

Good poem

Re: die (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:28:15 PM AEST
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..........and this is why i'm dreading the start of school. that's exactly what's gonna happen.....but great write.

--talli

Re: die (User Rating: 1 )
by jesusofholland on Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 02:05:37 AM AEST
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You've really captured the feelings that countless other young adults are feeling or have felt during their school experience. Just realize that for every jock a-hole, cheerleader skank, there are two of you, feeling isolated and scared, just hoping for someone to share themselves with. Good write.

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