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Array ( [sid] => 124694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Me [time] => 2006-08-20 10:42:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Me…………..
No one understands
How dark my world is
How I cannot escape
My worst nightmares
My dreams have always
Been crushed
I wish I could slit my wrists
And watch the blood rush

My voice gone
I could never speak,
this pain is restless
It hasn't stopped in weeks
The lights are dimming
These memories attacking me,
driving me insane

I'm starting to slip,
I need to get a grip.
And I feel like I'm alone
I'm falling into the hole
I'm scared, I don't want to lose my soul

My mind is like a whirlwind
Never really slowing down
My heart is frozen
From the hate
I need all this to end
Before it's all too late

Abandoned and weak,
feeling like a freak.
Lost in all my thoughts

Scared to speak
Paralyzed in fear
Afraid to acknowledge
all I know is to be real
Running away from all that I'm afraid of LIFE

Now I know all hope is lost,
and I'll have to pay the cost.
The doors to heaven will never open for me,
which means my soul will never be free.
I'll always be lost inside.

All my emotions run wild
And make me feel like a lost child
All I do is cry
And all I want to do is die

I can't give up
I need to fight
No matter how much
my body is shaken in fright

But no one knows what I feel
I do not tell my hardest ties
Someone help me up and take me away from here
I'm ready to be on my way

I'm sick of having to hide everything I hide.
All I want is revenge is that to much to ask?
And to throw away the burdens that I hide behind this mask
God hear me out……….

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Me

Contributed by judo on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 10:42:05 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Me…………..
No one understands
How dark my world is
How I cannot escape
My worst nightmares
My dreams have always
Been crushed
I wish I could slit my wrists
And watch the blood rush

My voice gone
I could never speak,
this pain is restless
It hasn't stopped in weeks
The lights are dimming
These memories attacking me,
driving me insane

I'm starting to slip,
I need to get a grip.
And I feel like I'm alone
I'm falling into the hole
I'm scared, I don't want to lose my soul

My mind is like a whirlwind
Never really slowing down
My heart is frozen
From the hate
I need all this to end
Before it's all too late

Abandoned and weak,
feeling like a freak.
Lost in all my thoughts

Scared to speak
Paralyzed in fear
Afraid to acknowledge
all I know is to be real
Running away from all that I'm afraid of LIFE

Now I know all hope is lost,
and I'll have to pay the cost.
The doors to heaven will never open for me,
which means my soul will never be free.
I'll always be lost inside.

All my emotions run wild
And make me feel like a lost child
All I do is cry
And all I want to do is die

I can't give up
I need to fight
No matter how much
my body is shaken in fright

But no one knows what I feel
I do not tell my hardest ties
Someone help me up and take me away from here
I'm ready to be on my way

I'm sick of having to hide everything I hide.
All I want is revenge is that to much to ask?
And to throw away the burdens that I hide behind this mask
God hear me out……….





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Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 04:32:36 PM AEST
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But no one knows what I feel
I do not tell my hardest ties
Someone help me up and take me away from here
I'm ready to be on my way

i understand this write completely. you arent alone in this feeling. excellent poem!


Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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very good write. read my latest post as a reply, you'll find the irony between what you wrote and what i did laughable.

--talli.


Re: Me (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 03:11:37 AM AEST
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Could be reading about myself, had a very bad year you are not alone, your poem made me realize im not either thank you xxxxx




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