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Array ( [sid] => 124677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vive la Resistance [time] => 2006-08-20 00:10:04 [hometext] => ( i wish i could show this to my therapist..) [bodytext] => Oh, my razor, my dearest blade,
Who loves me every night and day.
You are my queen, you beautiful thing.
You give me voice where I cannot sing.
So forbidden, they're just afraid:
We're symbiotic, our love unswayed.
The only one that never hurts me,
You make me deaf and unable to see.
You shield me from all and any pain,
Never asking questions of if I am sane.
I feel so pure, connected to you,
But they just want to break us in two.
Oh, my razor, my dearest blade,
For eleven years in love we've stayed. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 72 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => self-harmpoetry )

Vive la Resistance

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:10:04 AM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

Oh, my razor, my dearest blade,
Who loves me every night and day.
You are my queen, you beautiful thing.
You give me voice where I cannot sing.
So forbidden, they're just afraid:
We're symbiotic, our love unswayed.
The only one that never hurts me,
You make me deaf and unable to see.
You shield me from all and any pain,
Never asking questions of if I am sane.
I feel so pure, connected to you,
But they just want to break us in two.
Oh, my razor, my dearest blade,
For eleven years in love we've stayed.

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2006-08-20 00:10:04]
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Re: Vive la Resistance (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:25:00 AM AEST
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i hate having to call this poem beautiful, but that's what it is. it's as sweet as to any lover, and as bitter as with any love. brilliant.

--talli

ps. in one of my poems there was a phrase, "don't call the blade your only friend, it's your enemy, that never did anything to you but you abused anyway." but it seems pointless to give it to you because you obviously know what you're doing....so..good luck.

Re: Vive la Resistance (User Rating: 1 )
by xregret4romance on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:29:54 AM AEST
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=o Amazing, the word play and the meaning is just soo ughh excellent. Beautifully written

Re: Vive la Resistance (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 02:48:26 AM AEST
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an excellent poem worded beautifully

anyone who can write about such horror is gifted

so dont waste it.

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