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Array ( [sid] => 124674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Welcome To Hell [time] => 2006-08-19 22:10:34 [hometext] => This Is My By Far FAVEE Poem Ever. ((EVER)) [bodytext] => I bite my cheek to taste my blood
I take this needle pierce my toungue
Take a step towards me look in my eyes
See the hate tell me I’m too young
That’s what I expect nothing less
So I take this blade and shove it in
This is where it will begin

Circle up around me try to make a scene
Tell me I’m not perfect I’m just a human being
It’s not like I’m a robot designed perfect in every way
I get out of control so watch the things you say
I’ll be behind you to push you down
Life’s so much fun with me around
But watch your back cause I’ll be there watching every step
Don’t do something you might regret

Cause I’ll shut you up make you bite your cheek
Just to taste your blood
You’ll take this needle and pierce your toungue
I’ll take a step towards you tell you your too young
That’s what you’ll expect nothing less
You’ll take this blade and shove it in
That’s where it will begin

Cause you’ll be in that circle watching first hand
And maybe then you’ll understand
Cause you’ll be like a robot under my control
That’s what happens when you sell your soul
You lose yourself you lose your mind
And you’ll try to win it back forever and a time
And each time I’ll be there to push you down
Cause life’s so fun with me around
Even if it’s not your still stuck here
And I get to watch every flinch and tear

That’s what happens during an enternal life in hell
You could scream your head off no one can tell
I get to watch you suffer watch your pain
Hi I’m satan devil’s my name
But that doesn’t matter cause your stuck with me
I’m guessing you’re a new comer who might you be
I’ll spit in your face you filthy human being
I’ll circle up around you try to make a scene
Cause you’ll be like a robot under my control
That’s what happens when you sell your soul

Take a step towards me see the hate in my eyes
How long will it take for you to realize
Bite your cheek to taste your blood
Take my needle to pierce your toungue
Tell my face you don’t want to be here
Tell me your too young
That’s what I expect nothing less
And I’ll take this blade and pull it out
This is what hell is all about.

The End. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xDiSaStErPiEcEx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Welcome To Hell

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 10:10:34 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I bite my cheek to taste my blood
I take this needle pierce my toungue
Take a step towards me look in my eyes
See the hate tell me I’m too young
That’s what I expect nothing less
So I take this blade and shove it in
This is where it will begin

Circle up around me try to make a scene
Tell me I’m not perfect I’m just a human being
It’s not like I’m a robot designed perfect in every way
I get out of control so watch the things you say
I’ll be behind you to push you down
Life’s so much fun with me around
But watch your back cause I’ll be there watching every step
Don’t do something you might regret

Cause I’ll shut you up make you bite your cheek
Just to taste your blood
You’ll take this needle and pierce your toungue
I’ll take a step towards you tell you your too young
That’s what you’ll expect nothing less
You’ll take this blade and shove it in
That’s where it will begin

Cause you’ll be in that circle watching first hand
And maybe then you’ll understand
Cause you’ll be like a robot under my control
That’s what happens when you sell your soul
You lose yourself you lose your mind
And you’ll try to win it back forever and a time
And each time I’ll be there to push you down
Cause life’s so fun with me around
Even if it’s not your still stuck here
And I get to watch every flinch and tear

That’s what happens during an enternal life in hell
You could scream your head off no one can tell
I get to watch you suffer watch your pain
Hi I’m satan devil’s my name
But that doesn’t matter cause your stuck with me
I’m guessing you’re a new comer who might you be
I’ll spit in your face you filthy human being
I’ll circle up around you try to make a scene
Cause you’ll be like a robot under my control
That’s what happens when you sell your soul

Take a step towards me see the hate in my eyes
How long will it take for you to realize
Bite your cheek to taste your blood
Take my needle to pierce your toungue
Tell my face you don’t want to be here
Tell me your too young
That’s what I expect nothing less
And I’ll take this blade and pull it out
This is what hell is all about.

The End.




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Re: Welcome To Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 10:40:33 PM AEST
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Sounds Like a place I do not want to be


Re: Welcome To Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 10:40:53 PM AEST
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Sounds Like a place I do not want to be


Re: Welcome To Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 11:56:26 PM AEST
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Something about this one
I dig it


Re: Welcome To Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:29:17 AM AEST
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i loved the first stanza the most, but otherwise, great write.

--talli


Re: Welcome To Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 01:19:24 AM AEST
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I don't want to be there either!
Good write, I don't know what it is about it, but its good.


Re: Welcome To Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 02:52:36 AM AEST
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great poem
aslong as we do things wrong and carry on .. there's a voice urging us to stop or to carry on
only we can stop ourselves

but hes still there waiting for us to make an mistake

great write xx




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