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It must be the feeling of a heartbreak
I find it to be the worst feeling of them all
Why did I fall in love with her?
I should of known she'd be in love with someone else
And I should of known it'd be him she was in love with
And right now I am so amazed that I didn't see it sooner
And I'm crippled and I'm dazed from this feeling of heartbreak

What was I thinking?
What was I thinking letting myself fall in love with her?
I know that love just doesn't work out for me
Anyone else would of seen she wouldn't be in love with me
And now I can't help but feel like such a fool
Because I actually thought she would love me
And now I am wondering if I really want sweet romance
I think I'm done with it, done with the game, I've had enough [comments] => 2 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Crippled and Dazed

Contributed by Stalkee on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 03:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

What's this feeling I feel?
It must be the feeling of a heartbreak
I find it to be the worst feeling of them all
Why did I fall in love with her?
I should of known she'd be in love with someone else
And I should of known it'd be him she was in love with
And right now I am so amazed that I didn't see it sooner
And I'm crippled and I'm dazed from this feeling of heartbreak

What was I thinking?
What was I thinking letting myself fall in love with her?
I know that love just doesn't work out for me
Anyone else would of seen she wouldn't be in love with me
And now I can't help but feel like such a fool
Because I actually thought she would love me
And now I am wondering if I really want sweet romance
I think I'm done with it, done with the game, I've had enough

Copyright © Stalkee ... [ 2003-02-12 03:30:00]
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Re: Crippled and Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:21:27 AM AEST
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I think the title was suitable.... it reflected the pain you feel..
Jenni

Re: Crippled and Dazed (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:09:15 AM AEST
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I can relate to this a lot I have been rejected many times. This was an awesome poem and it reflects how u (and I) feel so very much... You know what though man after each rejection I find after a few months the hurt begins to fade and u can lift your face and laugh... Wait for it man. I'm here if u need to talk.

Bobo (Joel)

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