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Array ( [sid] => 124647 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Narkissos [time] => 2006-08-19 03:39:12 [hometext] => Well, I haven't wrote poetry in a month or two, and I wrote this one at 4:30 in the morning. Just like all the other ones it just popped into my head and it sounded pretty good. Enjoy, don't forget to comment! [bodytext] => Staring into her eyes.
Her eternal blue eyes.
You see a spark.
You see happiness.
As you once did.
Before something changed.
That something was you.
Was me.
It was all of us.
We all changed.
Some for good.
Others not.
But we all did.
Can you see it now?
How everything is so different.
Yet…all the same.
It’s a strange sense.
Something that’s not easily described.
But it is there.
Just like the air you breathe.
And the water in the oceans.
Yet you can't touch it .
Or feel it .
But it's there.
I don’t know how else to put it.
What once was still is.
But it’s different than that.
It’s a different shade of color,
It’s a different taste,
A different smell.
But you can still remember it….
Yes, yes, just like it was yesterday.
And I know this may confuse you.
May leave more questions than to be answered.
I know…and Im sorry it has to be that way.
But it does.
No one can change it.
No one can put a real, true meaning on it.
But take it for what it’s worth .
It may mean nothing to you now.
And who knows…maybe it never will.
Yet it’s still the inevitable force than many hate.
That many fear, many pray…to never come.
But it will, say what they will, it can’t be stopped.
And it never will.
So don’t hold your breath either, It will do you no good.
As this does confuse you, please take this one thing.
Always remember…
Always remember the change.
The change…
Change…


R0b
8/19/2006 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 21 [informant] => R0b [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Narkissos

Contributed by R0b on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 03:39:12 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Staring into her eyes.
Her eternal blue eyes.
You see a spark.
You see happiness.
As you once did.
Before something changed.
That something was you.
Was me.
It was all of us.
We all changed.
Some for good.
Others not.
But we all did.
Can you see it now?
How everything is so different.
Yet…all the same.
It’s a strange sense.
Something that’s not easily described.
But it is there.
Just like the air you breathe.
And the water in the oceans.
Yet you can't touch it .
Or feel it .
But it's there.
I don’t know how else to put it.
What once was still is.
But it’s different than that.
It’s a different shade of color,
It’s a different taste,
A different smell.
But you can still remember it….
Yes, yes, just like it was yesterday.
And I know this may confuse you.
May leave more questions than to be answered.
I know…and Im sorry it has to be that way.
But it does.
No one can change it.
No one can put a real, true meaning on it.
But take it for what it’s worth .
It may mean nothing to you now.
And who knows…maybe it never will.
Yet it’s still the inevitable force than many hate.
That many fear, many pray…to never come.
But it will, say what they will, it can’t be stopped.
And it never will.
So don’t hold your breath either, It will do you no good.
As this does confuse you, please take this one thing.
Always remember…
Always remember the change.
The change…
Change…


R0b
8/19/2006




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Re: Narkissos (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 03:48:38 AM AEST
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interesting points you've got there....as for the change...still trying to figure out whether it's needed in life, or should die. good write.

--talli


Re: Narkissos (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 03:55:56 PM AEST
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hey babe.. I liked this alot... I am at work... hehehe... Well.. this poem was wicked good. I liked it.. I liked how you wrote it and the way that it read.. It was brillant.. Like always... Great job... I am glad that you were able to write a poem... I love you...

Christina


Re: Narkissos (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 31st October 2006 @ 09:02:46 AM AEST
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Rob... hi... I just wanted to tell you that I think you should keep writing poetry... The style and form that you wirte with works and it is really great... Your poems have alot of deeper meaning and it is great to try and figure it out when reading it and make it fit to what the reader interprets it as... I think that you should keep trying to write though you have nothing to really write about... Just remember though I will always support you with this... I love you rob... OH yeah since I reread this I should tell you that I liked it again... I thought you did a really good job with this and I enjoyed reading it... take care!!!

Love always
Christina




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