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But I grew out of that now, so I guess I just invest
See you need money to make money, so stratigize till your set
If you dont make enough paper, the world'll leave you wet
You need to have an intelligent mind with common sence
It doesnt help to to be book smart or heaven sent
People come up any way they can
Gvt gets jealous and throws cases at the man
they hate to see us live better than them
when they floodin the streets with snow
And we plowin it all in
Plus all the other smuggled drugs that they pay no attention
It doesnt help to coruupt a country if their tryin to be a dominant one
think about it
their would be no fiends and their visions of stackin green would more easily be seen
Our counrty would build up quicker, become more smarter
No one could test us, we'd be the New Age Starters
Young, Hungry, but Healthy
Makin the right choices splitin off the right paths
Only rolling the best Kush to write scriptures to spit at the mass [comments] => 1 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Metikulus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Untitled

Contributed by Metikulus on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 01:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I used to bo out on the streets pushin them packs
But I grew out of that now, so I guess I just invest
See you need money to make money, so stratigize till your set
If you dont make enough paper, the world'll leave you wet
You need to have an intelligent mind with common sence
It doesnt help to to be book smart or heaven sent
People come up any way they can
Gvt gets jealous and throws cases at the man
they hate to see us live better than them
when they floodin the streets with snow
And we plowin it all in
Plus all the other smuggled drugs that they pay no attention
It doesnt help to coruupt a country if their tryin to be a dominant one
think about it
their would be no fiends and their visions of stackin green would more easily be seen
Our counrty would build up quicker, become more smarter
No one could test us, we'd be the New Age Starters
Young, Hungry, but Healthy
Makin the right choices splitin off the right paths
Only rolling the best Kush to write scriptures to spit at the mass

Copyright © Metikulus ... [ 2006-08-18 13:11:08]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:19:59 PM AEST
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Yes it was dark, but left a message.........Keep writng, as a reader I caught on.! I dont read alot of dark writes, but this was one I could realte too........Keep posting

Brew!~

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