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And maidens held in ivory towers
For thine eyes are like the sky so blue,
Tis the beauty that I see in you,

Your lips the colour of reddest wine,
Moist and sweet, they taste divine,
Thy kisses passionate like flaming fire,
Tis the beauty in you that I desire,

Thine skin so soft and so full of feeling,
Sends my senses wild, my mind a reeling,
Your loving caresses I crave so much,
Tis the beauty I feel, in your loving touch,

Your voice like velvet ,smooth and svelte,
Brings a tingle to me, and my heart it doth melt,
Thy loving words leave me trembling and weak,
Tis the beauty I hear whenever you speak,

Your love is like the warmest summers day,
Filled with sunshine in every way,
No coldness I feel , you filleth my soul,
Tis your infinite beauty , that makes me whole.

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Tis Your Beauty

Contributed by jerseysue on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:01:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Fair one thy presence doth shame the flowers,
And maidens held in ivory towers
For thine eyes are like the sky so blue,
Tis the beauty that I see in you,

Your lips the colour of reddest wine,
Moist and sweet, they taste divine,
Thy kisses passionate like flaming fire,
Tis the beauty in you that I desire,

Thine skin so soft and so full of feeling,
Sends my senses wild, my mind a reeling,
Your loving caresses I crave so much,
Tis the beauty I feel, in your loving touch,

Your voice like velvet ,smooth and svelte,
Brings a tingle to me, and my heart it doth melt,
Thy loving words leave me trembling and weak,
Tis the beauty I hear whenever you speak,

Your love is like the warmest summers day,
Filled with sunshine in every way,
No coldness I feel , you filleth my soul,
Tis your infinite beauty , that makes me whole.

Copyright © jerseysue ... [ 2006-08-17 18:01:06]
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Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:14:59 PM AEST
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I like your sense, the style
your choice of words

It gives me a deep feeling of old
and nicely wrote

I concur
I witness the affection
You pore to the page
with no ink

Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:59:21 PM AEST
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Very well written Sue.. I have always found so much divinity in the "old world style"..
and that you relaxed the composition a bit, with a added element all your own, makes this not only unique, but a joy to read as well-

Very nice..

B

Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:45:30 PM AEST
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sue, what a splendid piece. I love the repetition of the
phrase, "tis the beauty" throughout. It brought about a certain
cohesiveness to this stunning write!

Lovely write, sue. The old English breathes a medieval ambience
into this that I find breathtaking .. especially that first stanza.

~Breezy

Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 02:48:28 AM AEST
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Awesome writing, my friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:04:10 AM AEST
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Truly beautiful Sue loved it. xxx

Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by SAND-WIND-GHOST-OF-SORROW on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:46:06 AM AEST
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its very beutiful i like it,i can learn many thins of this poem one of them is the sence of word how to choose them and how to make pll feel them thank u for shareing it has been fun..bye ^^

Re: Tis Your Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 12:50:17 PM AEST
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Ah, how lovely Sue! This brought a vision that was not at all unlike Sandy's Hopelessly Devoted To You moment in Grease (*wink*) but is set considerably further back in time. Ah, mooning... 'tis such a lovely way to spend one's time, no?

Wonderfully written and beautifully conveyed. Well done!

~Snemmy

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