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Array ( [sid] => 124533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Under The Sun [time] => 2006-08-16 11:36:58 [hometext] => To met someone to love them and never leave them. Life though wonderful is very fickle. We continue despite this until memories are all we have. [bodytext] => When I need to see the light
My eyes closed to see your sight
The vision for all to hold
Legendary stories to be told

To possess you I never can
Forever I am your loving man
You are my sun my daily light
So beautiful dressed in white.

As you walk down the aisle
I dream we float down the Nile
An empress proud and strong
I your servant forever long.

Under your veil a smile so sweet
A kiss I long, as our hearts meet
Too many words the pace slow
All I remember is your glow.

This your day so long ago
And even now I never know
Why was I the lucky one?
By your grave under the sun.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Balmain_Tiger [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 34 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Under The Sun

Contributed by Balmain_Tiger on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 11:36:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

When I need to see the light
My eyes closed to see your sight
The vision for all to hold
Legendary stories to be told

To possess you I never can
Forever I am your loving man
You are my sun my daily light
So beautiful dressed in white.

As you walk down the aisle
I dream we float down the Nile
An empress proud and strong
I your servant forever long.

Under your veil a smile so sweet
A kiss I long, as our hearts meet
Too many words the pace slow
All I remember is your glow.

This your day so long ago
And even now I never know
Why was I the lucky one?
By your grave under the sun.

Copyright © Balmain_Tiger ... [ 2006-08-16 11:36:58]
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Re: Under The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by dougnut on Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:26:15 PM AEST
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A
Heartfelt Beautiful Poem In Memory Of your

Beloved.

Thanks for sharing this with us At YPDC.

Doug

Re: Under The Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 01:21:01 AM AEST
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Ouch!
This is heart wrenching but again incredible writing.
Even in it's pain there is much beauty.
huggs,
emy

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