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[aid] => mick
[title] => Remember Me
[time] => 2006-08-15 20:10:25
[hometext] => Just a short, simple one...
[bodytext] => In moments when the darkness falls,
And hope seems just a shallow dream,
Close your eyes and take a breath,
Remember them, remember me.
When hands will shake and tears will fall,
You need reminding how to breathe,
Look deep down into your thoughts,
Remember them, remember me.
And through every trip and every stumble,
Though you're far away from here,
Know that we are reaching out, and
Through our hearts we're always near.
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[informant] => lostinmyself
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[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => FriendshipPoetry
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Remember Me
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 08:10:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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In moments when the darkness falls,
And hope seems just a shallow dream,
Close your eyes and take a breath,
Remember them, remember me.
When hands will shake and tears will fall,
You need reminding how to breathe,
Look deep down into your thoughts,
Remember them, remember me.
And through every trip and every stumble,
Though you're far away from here,
Know that we are reaching out, and
Through our hearts we're always near.
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2006-08-15 20:10:25]
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Re: Remember Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 08:31:15 PM AEST
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Aw Philly .. such a tender and gentle write.
I truly love this one. It begs of such a soft and caring sentiment ..
of friendships that last throughout any amount of time
and space. Simply lovely ..
that last line .. *sigh* .. it's breathtaking hun ~
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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awww Philly girl
such a beautiful write
from a beautiful girl
luv ya
hugs |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 01:12:30 AM AEST
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You gotta know Philly, ... I couldn't have used many words more ... than I needed those particular ones right now. I don't imagine they were intended just for me, but they were just right for right now.
Nazzy ~
( whispers ... Thank You ) |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 05:52:22 AM AEST
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Such a beautiful poem! I can't say anything that hasn't already been said, except that sometimes the simple ones say it all,
Tuesdayx |
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Re: Remember Me
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 04:15:42 PM AEST
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| Short , sweet and wonderful. Enjoyed reading it very much. Sue x |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 07:11:36 PM AEST
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Just short, simple and beautiful!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Remember Me
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 08:10:58 PM AEST
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Reading this poem is like receiving a soft gentle embrace.....an emotional hug. It's comforting and beautifully written. I really like what I would call the theme of this lovely poem: you're never further away then a thought.....a heart beat! This poem inspires me!
Well done Philly,
Will
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Re: Remember Me
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:18:26 PM AEST
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I understand this as a gentle reminder for those who find themselves remiss at times at the nature of human-kindness~
regrets my friend, for coming so late to this..
..a lovely post Phil.. truly~
B |
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Re: Remember Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 07:14:55 AM AEST
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What's unique about this piece is that it seems to reach out to each and every reader as if it was meant just for them. I know I feel that way.
Wonderful the way you touch each of us.... |
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Re: Remember Me
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by AirHead on
Saturday, 24th March 2007 @ 07:44:39 PM AEST
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| Lovely write and, if I may, ..............dedicate to someone very close to my heart....always |
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