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I stare at these silly lines to figure out what's behind there
Too much light, for one
not nearly dark enough to fall into my dreams

Yes, I love you
No, you're a liar

And the truth is I would've loved you despite it
But your kiss came to have no definition
and your eyes scream: month number four, month number four!
the moon is much too much to take

"she's crazy"

that's so sweet, sweetie
you think you know how crazy i am

when you stare in to a mirror just know i could've settled it down
but you never bothered

pragmatist, ha

now there's a laugh

I hope she tasted better than me, sweetie

It's so sad Henry Rollins had to speak for you

LIAR!!!

First you ate my soul then you ripped my heart out and used the veins to string your guitar
and my aorta to suck the life out of your rum and coke

AHHHH...that's better
I could've used some hardening, anyway

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you ARE a LIAR, saith henry rollins

Contributed by zeppchic420 on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 09:43:08 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I use my hard knocks on a door cracked open
I stare at these silly lines to figure out what's behind there
Too much light, for one
not nearly dark enough to fall into my dreams

Yes, I love you
No, you're a liar

And the truth is I would've loved you despite it
But your kiss came to have no definition
and your eyes scream: month number four, month number four!
the moon is much too much to take

"she's crazy"

that's so sweet, sweetie
you think you know how crazy i am

when you stare in to a mirror just know i could've settled it down
but you never bothered

pragmatist, ha

now there's a laugh

I hope she tasted better than me, sweetie

It's so sad Henry Rollins had to speak for you

LIAR!!!

First you ate my soul then you ripped my heart out and used the veins to string your guitar
and my aorta to suck the life out of your rum and coke

AHHHH...that's better
I could've used some hardening, anyway

Copyright © zeppchic420 ... [ 2006-08-14 21:43:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: you ARE a LIAR, saith henry rollins (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 12:10:14 AM AEST
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I love this type of poetry. Ilike henry rollins too. Black Flag-(Rather see you dead, bullet in your head, in a smoke filled room, with your guts spilling out all around you dieeee
mother *****!-) Who doesn't have a soft spot for that?

Wonderful poem. I loke the clarity and honesty of your writing.

larkspur

Re: you ARE a LIAR, saith henry rollins (User Rating: 1 )
by Keilantra on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 09:47:42 PM AEST
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Holy geez.
this is really different form most of hwa i read, but its really....gosh, i cant describe but i love it.
I wrote a poem like this called 'a product of hearstings'
a long time ago
and its like, i could find myself somewhere in this poem yanno?
really great stuff you have here. really.
keep it up.

xXx
~kei

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