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Loving Is the Modest Guy
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 04:13:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Benevolent in gracious form,
He awaits me at the corner wall-
Surpassing expectation; he catches me off-guard with his kiss.
Less amorous in delight, senses waken to worlds I’ve missed.
Unpretentious is the modest guy,
He follows me in my dreams;
Waits for me at the door of my wall,
Enraptured in “Love’s Rose” he rest.
From Destiny’s field, he brings me a tender blade,
Simple elegance~, a token of that moment rare.
No, it is not that you are beautiful; he seemed to say.
You are divinely inspired, just for me, in every way.
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
... [
2006-08-14 16:13:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Loving Is the Modest Guy
(User Rating: 1 ) by kellycat on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 07:27:22 PM AEST (User
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i really like this poem...good job |
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Re: Loving Is the Modest Guy
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 09:39:47 PM AEST (User
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i really liked it...very nice!!
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Re: Loving Is the Modest Guy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 07:07:07 PM AEST (User
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Lilly~
this was exceptionally beautiful and that last
line is extraordinary!
There is a certain serenity in this that I find
completely sublime ..
Great post!
~Breezy
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