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Array ( [sid] => 124461 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => no title [time] => 2006-08-14 16:12:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => there i go again,
sippin another beer,
another pack of ciggerettes,
a bowl or two,
wishing my life was over.
cutting my wrist again,
my arms and my legs,
cut to peices.
torn up in side,
on the outsude too.
the birth of me was painful,
being brought in to this nastey world,
they say he exist,
but he dont,
if he does,
would he have taken her?
should i have been there that day,
or home to check on her,
to kno i will not,
as shes gone now,
but the fact that i didnt stay,
does that ake me a bad kid?
but now i have a reason,
to make her proud,
and stay alive,
go somewhere with my life.
to do what she wanted.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 13 [informant] => edward_jarvis2000 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

no title

Contributed by edward_jarvis2000 on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 04:12:01 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

there i go again,
sippin another beer,
another pack of ciggerettes,
a bowl or two,
wishing my life was over.
cutting my wrist again,
my arms and my legs,
cut to peices.
torn up in side,
on the outsude too.
the birth of me was painful,
being brought in to this nastey world,
they say he exist,
but he dont,
if he does,
would he have taken her?
should i have been there that day,
or home to check on her,
to kno i will not,
as shes gone now,
but the fact that i didnt stay,
does that ake me a bad kid?
but now i have a reason,
to make her proud,
and stay alive,
go somewhere with my life.
to do what she wanted.

Copyright © edward_jarvis2000 ... [ 2006-08-14 16:12:01]
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Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 05:10:13 PM AEST
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"there i go again,
sippin another beer,
another pack of ciggerettes,
a bowl or two,
wishing my life was over."

i could really relate to this first section in the poem. all of these things numb our feelings and take our pain away..

just be strong and keep your head up..excellent poem.

Re: no title (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:35:52 PM AEST
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dark..depressing...but good write. hope it works out for ya, though.....when it gets to that extreme level, any sort of happiness will be temporary. good luck.

~talli

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