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Array ( [sid] => 124409 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Seperating Destinies [time] => 2006-08-13 12:32:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Every second makes a minute,
Every minute makes an hour,
Every hour makes a day,
As these days pass by,
I’m always trying to be by your side
Knowing what’s right and wrong,
I don’t want to know,
As long as I’m with you,
Knowing you’re with me too.
If we are together, why am I so afraid?
I don’t want to lose you,
I want to be with you,
I just feel insecure, I need your support.
Why does converting come up all the time, does it matter?
Religion means everything to you,
For me, you’re everything
Because of this religion existing,
Our destination separates while it should not be segregating
Why not compromise?
Why is this world’s belief so typical?
That’s my question
Following the path of this journey is so difficult,
Knowing this world’s beliefs is so stereotypical
Love happens with anyone.
All the fingers are not the same,
Nor are dog’s tails
Why not compromise to our decision?
Don’t you want to see us happy?
We are leaving it to our destiny,
See what it brings to us…..

Part 2

If our destinies don’t meet,
Our love will always remain for each other,
If we are apart,
Don’t forget my love as day go by,
Don’t judge my love, as it will always be by your side,
Don’t think you’re alone in this world to be hatred,
While it means nothing, so don’t be frustrated,
***** happens so face it,
Don’t be hurt,
It should be eliminated.
You know I want you,
Love you,
Let’s face it
I wanna stick to you, I mean it,
But it will be hard for us to be with.
Destiny is that we have no control of,
We will try to be together no matter what… [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 14 [informant] => saloni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
Seperating Destinies

Contributed by saloni on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:32:19 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Every second makes a minute,
Every minute makes an hour,
Every hour makes a day,
As these days pass by,
I’m always trying to be by your side
Knowing what’s right and wrong,
I don’t want to know,
As long as I’m with you,
Knowing you’re with me too.
If we are together, why am I so afraid?
I don’t want to lose you,
I want to be with you,
I just feel insecure, I need your support.
Why does converting come up all the time, does it matter?
Religion means everything to you,
For me, you’re everything
Because of this religion existing,
Our destination separates while it should not be segregating
Why not compromise?
Why is this world’s belief so typical?
That’s my question
Following the path of this journey is so difficult,
Knowing this world’s beliefs is so stereotypical
Love happens with anyone.
All the fingers are not the same,
Nor are dog’s tails
Why not compromise to our decision?
Don’t you want to see us happy?
We are leaving it to our destiny,
See what it brings to us…..

Part 2

If our destinies don’t meet,
Our love will always remain for each other,
If we are apart,
Don’t forget my love as day go by,
Don’t judge my love, as it will always be by your side,
Don’t think you’re alone in this world to be hatred,
While it means nothing, so don’t be frustrated,
***** happens so face it,
Don’t be hurt,
It should be eliminated.
You know I want you,
Love you,
Let’s face it
I wanna stick to you, I mean it,
But it will be hard for us to be with.
Destiny is that we have no control of,
We will try to be together no matter what…




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Re: Seperating Destinies (User Rating: 1 )
by crazyn on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:54:19 PM AEST
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powerfull piece of literature, shows contrast from your previous poem. good read.


Re: Seperating Destinies (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:22:15 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Wise words here.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Seperating Destinies (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:05:36 PM AEST
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Intersting poem..the seperation..and the subject made me think. Love vs. religion..hmmmmm.


Re: Seperating Destinies (User Rating: 1 )
by shaba_11 on Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 04:13:20 AM AEST
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Yo, sick guy saloni. Nicely written. Dont worry, time will come up with a decision. Well done. I didnt knew you wrote poems. Why dont you post some more?




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