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Array ( [sid] => 124393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Melting Mentally [time] => 2006-08-13 01:25:07 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Got a deep fascination
in strange sensations
I get up to fall down
bounce
round and round
like a confused clown
talk to myself
when no one's around.

I live in a tree
and swing
with monkees
have a secret fantasy
no one would believe,
I get the munchies
I eat
I sleep.

Everything is so digital
copies of copies
forgotten
what is original.

I stop
and ah
I pause
as I adjust to a new level....
cause
what was lost
was something quite simple,
I laugh a little
excersizng my dimples
giggle giggle wiggle wiggle
sometimes
I get so mental
when I am melting. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 25 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
Melting Mentally

Contributed by secretwind on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:25:07 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Got a deep fascination
in strange sensations
I get up to fall down
bounce
round and round
like a confused clown
talk to myself
when no one's around.

I live in a tree
and swing
with monkees
have a secret fantasy
no one would believe,
I get the munchies
I eat
I sleep.

Everything is so digital
copies of copies
forgotten
what is original.

I stop
and ah
I pause
as I adjust to a new level....
cause
what was lost
was something quite simple,
I laugh a little
excersizng my dimples
giggle giggle wiggle wiggle
sometimes
I get so mental
when I am melting.




Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2006-08-13 01:25:07]
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Re: Melting Mentally (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:55:39 AM AEST
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He he, What have you been smoking?

Thanks for the smile,

larkspur.


Re: Melting Mentally (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 02:40:03 AM AEST
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Very cute dear friend.
Best be carefull where ya melt. U jist mite fo git the way back home.
Big smiles,
emy
I think I need to switch to your brand of smokes.


Re: Melting Mentally (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 03:23:51 AM AEST
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Very quirky and infectious, that bizarre topsoil covering a profound message about sameness and difference. If melting gets this creative, then I'm an ice cube, I'm an ice cube!!

Spike


Re: Melting Mentally (User Rating: 1 )
by Shmokin on Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 06:12:41 AM AEST
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loved it,, excellent wimsey write, thanx for sharin :-)


Re: Melting Mentally (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 10:55:02 AM AEST
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Made me laugh..love it..

Love this bit.. xxxxx
I laugh a little
excersizng my dimples
giggle giggle wiggle wiggle




Re: Melting Mentally (User Rating: 1 )
by RLWildPassions on Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 06:38:48 PM AEST
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excellent way to explain the next level of growing... love this.. rl




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