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Array ( [sid] => 124360 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Life is profound [time] => 2006-08-11 23:18:11 [hometext] => a poem i wrote off the top of my head.. [bodytext] => here i am for another tear.
lying in fear, paralyzed by the discomfort i feel.
adapted to the feelings that i feel.
but i am overwhelmed by everything that occurs.
depressed and down, im in for another round.

this life is profound.

the way it never lets go.
the way i am never set free.
like the way that i want to be.
i want to be me.
but i dont even know what that means.

destination is nowhere, destination is not to be seen.
i am in a mess, i must confess.
that i need god on my side, i need god in my life.
this strife is too much to take...sometimes i just need a break.
from the constant pain in my heart, and the constant worry in my head.

hours alone, i am truly on my own.
the tone in their voices, and the constant choices.
far away in a jaded room, in a faded room.
walls are not precise, and the dice it does not fall.
i try and crawl, but my muscles are all but strong.
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Life is profound

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 11:18:11 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

here i am for another tear.
lying in fear, paralyzed by the discomfort i feel.
adapted to the feelings that i feel.
but i am overwhelmed by everything that occurs.
depressed and down, im in for another round.

this life is profound.

the way it never lets go.
the way i am never set free.
like the way that i want to be.
i want to be me.
but i dont even know what that means.

destination is nowhere, destination is not to be seen.
i am in a mess, i must confess.
that i need god on my side, i need god in my life.
this strife is too much to take...sometimes i just need a break.
from the constant pain in my heart, and the constant worry in my head.

hours alone, i am truly on my own.
the tone in their voices, and the constant choices.
far away in a jaded room, in a faded room.
walls are not precise, and the dice it does not fall.
i try and crawl, but my muscles are all but strong.

Copyright © frmpoison2static ... [ 2006-08-11 23:18:11]
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Re: Life is profound (User Rating: 1 )
by surrealsenses on Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 05:13:16 AM AEST
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i understand, the raw emotion of overwhelming analyzation and anxiety which leaves you dizzy and dazed. nice to know someone else can be as afflicted...remember to breath, and a prescription never hurts! :P

Re: Life is profound (User Rating: 1 )
by snowflake on Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 08:36:27 PM AEST
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Great write i totally can relate thanks for the comment on MY life greatly appreciated
SNOWflake**

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