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Array ( [sid] => 124358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY life [time] => 2006-08-11 22:30:11 [hometext] => dont really know what to say about it read it yourself [bodytext] => one minute i'm happy
the next minute i'm sad
whats going on with me
i'm losing friends so fast
pushing them away is what i'm good at
not acting their way but oh well too bad
i'm not changing i thought i made that clear
what more do you possibly want
i've been like this for atleast two years
you call me a white girl
tell me i need to change
but if you were a true friend
you wouldnt worry about those kind of things
stop acting is what i hear alot
i'm not acting its the way i am
you can either love it or not
get over yourself
its not always about you
hello people do you see what your doing to me
i mean i do have feeling too
but just think i'm not like i use to be
you should be proud of that
i know for a fact you dont want the old bRiI back
the yelling and screaming i use to do
if you gave me the wrong look
i had a ear full to say to you
so dont tell me to change
you'll just be wasting your time
please let me remind you
this is my life i repeat its all MINE
people like you i need to let go
it might not be the best decision
but it might help some of the pain
i keep inside though
depressed and too stress
thats not how my teen years are suppose to be
i'm suppose to living it up like some kind of paradise
but maybe next time i'll think twice
when i learn to trust again
but i think until then
i'll stick with being solo
with having NO friends [comments] => 3 [counter] => 543 [topic] => 6 [informant] => snowflake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
MY life

Contributed by snowflake on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:30:11 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



one minute i'm happy
the next minute i'm sad
whats going on with me
i'm losing friends so fast
pushing them away is what i'm good at
not acting their way but oh well too bad
i'm not changing i thought i made that clear
what more do you possibly want
i've been like this for atleast two years
you call me a white girl
tell me i need to change
but if you were a true friend
you wouldnt worry about those kind of things
stop acting is what i hear alot
i'm not acting its the way i am
you can either love it or not
get over yourself
its not always about you
hello people do you see what your doing to me
i mean i do have feeling too
but just think i'm not like i use to be
you should be proud of that
i know for a fact you dont want the old bRiI back
the yelling and screaming i use to do
if you gave me the wrong look
i had a ear full to say to you
so dont tell me to change
you'll just be wasting your time
please let me remind you
this is my life i repeat its all MINE
people like you i need to let go
it might not be the best decision
but it might help some of the pain
i keep inside though
depressed and too stress
thats not how my teen years are suppose to be
i'm suppose to living it up like some kind of paradise
but maybe next time i'll think twice
when i learn to trust again
but i think until then
i'll stick with being solo
with having NO friends




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Re: MY life (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 11:07:57 PM AEST
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very emotional brutally honest like my own poetry


Re: MY life (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 11:09:01 PM AEST
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I know what you mean. I have been living in NJ for four years because of my wife and I have no friends here. Im in the process of losing her too, in some ways thats a good thing in others a bad. I liked the way that you wrote this. But I can completely relate to what you have written. Well if you need to talk please allow me to listen. It sucks not having any friends. I sure could use one from time to time. Let me know if you would like to talk sometime because I would like to get to know more about you. Keep on writting...You did a good job.

Take care-
Rich


Re: MY life (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 12:59:27 PM AEST
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very good and honest..keep it up..




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