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[aid] => mick
[title] => Nothing Really There
[time] => 2006-08-11 21:17:28
[hometext] => Reality is much more -and, paradoxically- much less than what we experience with our senses.
[bodytext] =>
I see, but nothing is really there,
there’s a particle stability everywhere
waves of light make the wind in my hair,
but its still just energy in the air
The other realms are there to see,
if senses can register energy
where quanta appear and disappear,
like magic, nothing is really there
Neutrinos bombard us constantly,
a particle storm that cannot be
the silent vastness of atoms share,
the miracle of nothing everywhere
No intrinsic, separate you or me,
the parts give rise to the whole, you see
at times when I just despair,
I remember its all just energy there.
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 307
[topic] => 49
[informant] => spike
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 48
[ratings] => 10
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => mystical
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Nothing Really There
Contributed by
spike
on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 09:17:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I see, but nothing is really there,
there’s a particle stability everywhere
waves of light make the wind in my hair,
but its still just energy in the air
The other realms are there to see,
if senses can register energy
where quanta appear and disappear,
like magic, nothing is really there
Neutrinos bombard us constantly,
a particle storm that cannot be
the silent vastness of atoms share,
the miracle of nothing everywhere
No intrinsic, separate you or me,
the parts give rise to the whole, you see
at times when I just despair,
I remember its all just energy there.
Copyright ©
spike
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2006-08-11 21:17:28]
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by surrealsenses on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:40:57 PM AEST
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overwhelmingly inspirational.
i enjoyed reading it very much.
i am not much for using structure or rhyme, but you make it fit like a puzzle.
your line, the miracle of nothing everywhere....my sentiments exactly!
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:48:54 AM AEST
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| I liked your poem. It was different. I enjoyed reading. Nice job! |
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 04:55:57 AM AEST
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You're not only a very talented writer. U r a genious too.
Very impressive write.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 08:37:51 AM AEST
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Enjoyed the read and the message here. This piece had a good flow to it.
And yes, we are all connected by this wonderful geometric pattern of energy. Very cool write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 10:02:09 AM AEST
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I agree with emy, Spike. You're a genious! And a master with the words.
Hey, I'm on my deathbed and the flowers couldn't be more beautiful that right now! And the wolf sanctuary just got twelve puppies! 6 Arctic and 6 Timber! Better hurry! lol Just kiddin', but not about the flowers and the wolves.
This was just another of your normal, SUPERB writes.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by wizard on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 11:04:50 AM AEST
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very nice..."the miracle of nothing everywhere".. that about sums up our existence..great post
wiz |
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 06:27:29 PM AEST
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Hey S!!
I would be disinclined to agree with you on this one, dear poet. For, in my humble opinion,
energy IS something.. though we perhaps cannot visualize it .. we can't see the wind ..
but we feel it. We can't see the sweetness of cookies baking, but we can smell it.
It's really there!!
Even when two souls meet for the first time in a physical sense .. the chemistry
is felt like nothing else on this earth!!! lol An attraction of sorts .. ENERGY!!
Fascinating stuff Spikerdoodle!
~Breezy
(who knows you mean nothing of SUBSTANCE is
really there, but couldn't help herself! teehee) |
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Re: Nothing Really There
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 03:09:29 AM AEST
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Yes, all matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration. There is no such thing as death because life is just a dream and we are an imagination of ourselves.
I'm interested in string theory and quantum mechanics, and was delighted by this poem.
Thanks for the read,
larkspur |
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