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Array ( [sid] => 124353 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleed the Pain Away [time] => 2006-08-11 20:56:57 [hometext] => this 1 doesn't rhyme but its true and so many people can relate [bodytext] => The tarnished blade cuts into my delicate skin
The blood still stains my hands
Corrupting my soul
Scaring myself into unconsciousness

Struggling to hold on to nothing that's there
Surrounding me in sorrow and self pity
Shattering the memory of you
The memory of love and hate

Im wearing my heart out on my wrist
Say you won't care
I want to bleed
Bleed the pain away
So I can finally forget you

The blade reminds me of you
Painful yet amazing....

I gave you my everything
I gave you my heart
I gave you my blade
And I gave you my life
But it's nothing special....
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Bleed the Pain Away

Contributed by HeArTbRoKEnGiRl on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:56:57 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

The tarnished blade cuts into my delicate skin
The blood still stains my hands
Corrupting my soul
Scaring myself into unconsciousness

Struggling to hold on to nothing that's there
Surrounding me in sorrow and self pity
Shattering the memory of you
The memory of love and hate

Im wearing my heart out on my wrist
Say you won't care
I want to bleed
Bleed the pain away
So I can finally forget you

The blade reminds me of you
Painful yet amazing....

I gave you my everything
I gave you my heart
I gave you my blade
And I gave you my life
But it's nothing special....

Copyright © HeArTbRoKEnGiRl ... [ 2006-08-11 20:56:57]
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Re: Bleed the Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:59:48 PM AEST
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It doesn't have to rhyme...It flows beauitfully, and that's what counts

Re: Bleed the Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by crazygirl on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 09:26:55 PM AEST
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Your poetry is mind blowing, and amazingly deep. I like this one especially.
Keep it up.
-bailey rose-

Re: Bleed the Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 05:05:57 AM AEST
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These writes just break my heart.
It's very sad and written really well.
You need to learn to luv yourself.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy

Re: Bleed the Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Drapes on Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 10:19:08 AM AEST
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Oh perfect. I can definitely relate. it may not rhyme, but it doesn't have to! That was really good! Good luck to you...
-Drapes

Re: Bleed the Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by stripes on Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:05:41 AM AEST
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this poem has a lot of feeling in it, and i can see how hard it was for you to go through this but remember there are others out there that are going through the same thing. This was an excellent poem and you are very good at writing poetry

Re: Bleed the Pain Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 09:04:35 PM AEST
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The emotions are incredible..This poem is just amazing...please keep writing

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