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Array ( [sid] => 124350 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SWEET DREAMS [time] => 2006-08-11 20:36:00 [hometext] => I've been away for a long time... but I still come and read in here occasionally but tonight I decided to post again.... Hope you like this... [bodytext] => I'm in a cheap motel room, just for tonight
There's not much in it, but a chair along the bed.
It's dark and cold, I'm lying on the bed thinking.
The only sound I can hear besides my breath is chirping from outside.
I'm quite calm, and I’m not even moving.
My eyes gaze the ceiling. I can’t feel my body right now

I know this is the right thing, but will I be okay after?
It's not that I’m afraid; rather curious, that’s all!
Not regretful, not sad, nor angry. I just want to get over with this.
Don’t ask yourself why I’m doing this! I’ll tell you:
I can’t direct my life; I want to be in charge for ONCE.
I want to LIVE my life
Aaaah! I’m too sleepy already; soon it is going to be peaceful.

They say God is supposed to wake you if it’s not your time yet,
You know... when it’s not meant to happen.
Interesting isn’t it?
Well then God, now is your chance. Show me, tell me, wake me.
Let me have back that faith that somehow, somewhere in time, I seem to have lost.
It's getting late, are you ever gonna do anything here?
Un-busy yourself for a sec, will ya?
Don't you want to stop this?
Don't you want to help me?

Oh well! I’m way past my league and it’s getting too quiet, right?
So long now, guess you’re not up to it tonight.

It's even harder to breathe now!!
Well.... that means I have to go
Good night
This bed is really comfy
Anyway...
Wish me sweet dreams! [comments] => 5 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 36 [informant] => cursed_witch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
SWEET DREAMS

Contributed by cursed_witch on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:36:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I'm in a cheap motel room, just for tonight
There's not much in it, but a chair along the bed.
It's dark and cold, I'm lying on the bed thinking.
The only sound I can hear besides my breath is chirping from outside.
I'm quite calm, and I’m not even moving.
My eyes gaze the ceiling. I can’t feel my body right now

I know this is the right thing, but will I be okay after?
It's not that I’m afraid; rather curious, that’s all!
Not regretful, not sad, nor angry. I just want to get over with this.
Don’t ask yourself why I’m doing this! I’ll tell you:
I can’t direct my life; I want to be in charge for ONCE.
I want to LIVE my life
Aaaah! I’m too sleepy already; soon it is going to be peaceful.

They say God is supposed to wake you if it’s not your time yet,
You know... when it’s not meant to happen.
Interesting isn’t it?
Well then God, now is your chance. Show me, tell me, wake me.
Let me have back that faith that somehow, somewhere in time, I seem to have lost.
It's getting late, are you ever gonna do anything here?
Un-busy yourself for a sec, will ya?
Don't you want to stop this?
Don't you want to help me?

Oh well! I’m way past my league and it’s getting too quiet, right?
So long now, guess you’re not up to it tonight.

It's even harder to breathe now!!
Well.... that means I have to go
Good night
This bed is really comfy
Anyway...
Wish me sweet dreams!




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Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:43:41 PM AEST
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So morbidly beauitful


Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by frmpoison2static on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:53:43 PM AEST
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wow, that was amazing...


Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 04:34:24 AM AEST
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Very interesting, thought provoking, real.
Good work.
Mystifying writing.
Huggs, prayers,
emy


Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by saphfyre on Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 05:41:16 PM AEST
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such a real feeling.. I haven't gotten so close before, but I have thought about it... and I know so well the feeling that no one, even God, wants to help you, even if you are not giving them a real opportunity to... I have felt so often. And feeling like it would just be.. almost interesting to see what happens. Been there too.


Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by searchingmyself on Friday, 28th September 2007 @ 10:20:39 PM AEST
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So real, so raw, so human....

all my love




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