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Array ( [sid] => 124345 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => your movie [time] => 2006-08-11 18:11:46 [hometext] => i thaught he cared. [bodytext] => It hurts me to think
I actually thought you would be thinking of me
But I can't move on
It seems time has paused
But I'm still watching a movie
And you're the star

You can easily move on
But for me
Time has stopped
My life is lifeless without you
I can't be happy
And I can't be sad
I have no emotion
Without you I can't go on
You no longer carry the pain
You just let it go
I wonder if you ever really loved me

Time has stopped with motionless speed
It hurts me to watch your movie
I'm just an object it seems
Something you can through away
You just let me go
Dropped all the pain
While I'm still stuck here with no emotion
And all I can feel is the pain deep inside

I was a fool
I was blinded with your words
I was such a fool
I was a fool to believe in you
To think
I actually believed those 3 powerful words

Just an object you can throw away
Stuck here watching your movie
Watching it on the big screen
No emotions
Just pain
I feel so empty
Powerless and plain
I thought you had changed
I thought you grew up
I thought wrong
Just another silly little boy

I believed those words you said
I took them and let them stay in my heart
Now they won't leave
I guess to you its just a game

I can't let go
There is no love
There is no will
To survive
There is no emotion
There is no trust
There is
Emptiness and pain
You poked a pin hole into my heart
I have no feelings left to spare
I'm pure emptiness
I can not forgive you
You played the fools game
You messed with my heart
I have no love left to give

I can not move on
I don't know why
I have no love
My love was in my heart
But my love seeped out of a pin hole
Just big enough to drain it all out

I have no feelings
And I have no emotions
I'm empty
I'm depressed
And disappointed in you
Time has stopped
With motionless speed
I thought you changed
But you didn't
Just another silly little boy
I'm watching your movie
And I'd have to say you messed up
Your movie is flawed
It doesn't have a fairytale ending
But the ending is the beginning
So don't mess it up again

Time has stopped
Watching your movie
I have no emotions
Because they are gone
I'm just an object to you
Motionless speed nothing is real
Reality is just fiction
And your life is a movie

I can't believe I trusted you with my love
You just threw it away
Didn't even look back
It hurts me to think
I thought you were thinking of me [comments] => 1 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 22 [informant] => The_Unknown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
your movie

Contributed by The_Unknown on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 06:11:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It hurts me to think
I actually thought you would be thinking of me
But I can't move on
It seems time has paused
But I'm still watching a movie
And you're the star

You can easily move on
But for me
Time has stopped
My life is lifeless without you
I can't be happy
And I can't be sad
I have no emotion
Without you I can't go on
You no longer carry the pain
You just let it go
I wonder if you ever really loved me

Time has stopped with motionless speed
It hurts me to watch your movie
I'm just an object it seems
Something you can through away
You just let me go
Dropped all the pain
While I'm still stuck here with no emotion
And all I can feel is the pain deep inside

I was a fool
I was blinded with your words
I was such a fool
I was a fool to believe in you
To think
I actually believed those 3 powerful words

Just an object you can throw away
Stuck here watching your movie
Watching it on the big screen
No emotions
Just pain
I feel so empty
Powerless and plain
I thought you had changed
I thought you grew up
I thought wrong
Just another silly little boy

I believed those words you said
I took them and let them stay in my heart
Now they won't leave
I guess to you its just a game

I can't let go
There is no love
There is no will
To survive
There is no emotion
There is no trust
There is
Emptiness and pain
You poked a pin hole into my heart
I have no feelings left to spare
I'm pure emptiness
I can not forgive you
You played the fools game
You messed with my heart
I have no love left to give

I can not move on
I don't know why
I have no love
My love was in my heart
But my love seeped out of a pin hole
Just big enough to drain it all out

I have no feelings
And I have no emotions
I'm empty
I'm depressed
And disappointed in you
Time has stopped
With motionless speed
I thought you changed
But you didn't
Just another silly little boy
I'm watching your movie
And I'd have to say you messed up
Your movie is flawed
It doesn't have a fairytale ending
But the ending is the beginning
So don't mess it up again

Time has stopped
Watching your movie
I have no emotions
Because they are gone
I'm just an object to you
Motionless speed nothing is real
Reality is just fiction
And your life is a movie

I can't believe I trusted you with my love
You just threw it away
Didn't even look back
It hurts me to think
I thought you were thinking of me




Copyright © The_Unknown ... [ 2006-08-11 18:11:46]
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Re: your movie (User Rating: 1 )
by JockPhillips on Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:38:59 PM AEST
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A good poem that I like with long and emotion. Doing good and other things. Keep it up!




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