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Array ( [sid] => 124343 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => they lied [time] => 2006-08-11 17:09:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => it been six weeks kev, since your gone
people try and tell me to be strong
they say say time is an healer
but i say they are all wrong...

i`m feeling worse kev not better
so to try and ease my grief
i write it down in a letter
and yet people say it will get better

i know they mean well
but since the day you died
you won`t believe the tears i have cried
what i want to know bro
is why you had to go

i hope one day you`ll come and find me
and perharps then
i will be happy

but when they say "give it time"
it`s just a lie
i miss you bro
why did you have to die
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 39 [informant] => sha-wales [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

they lied

Contributed by sha-wales on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:09:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

it been six weeks kev, since your gone
people try and tell me to be strong
they say say time is an healer
but i say they are all wrong...

i`m feeling worse kev not better
so to try and ease my grief
i write it down in a letter
and yet people say it will get better

i know they mean well
but since the day you died
you won`t believe the tears i have cried
what i want to know bro
is why you had to go

i hope one day you`ll come and find me
and perharps then
i will be happy

but when they say "give it time"
it`s just a lie
i miss you bro
why did you have to die
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Copyright © sha-wales ... [ 2006-08-11 17:09:55]
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Re: they lied (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:41:31 PM AEST
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omg. I am so sorry for you loss. this is such a sad poem. its good. but sad.
sry for ur loss.
luvs ya!
~*Jess*~

Re: they lied (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:45:04 PM AEST
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omg. I am so sorry for you loss. this is such a sad poem. its good. but sad.
sry for ur loss.
luvs ya!
~*Jess*~

Re: they lied (User Rating: 1 )
by gothicangel on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:46:59 PM AEST
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Hi there!
I can't say how sorry I am to hear about your loss.. But I can tell you that I have been through some of the same thing.. And i can say you that it's not true what they say.. it won't get better.. but you will learn to handle it better.. I hope things will turn out good for you.. -goth

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