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Array ( [sid] => 124333 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i thought u'd never leave me.... [time] => 2006-08-11 10:47:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I thought u’d never leave me,
Talking about you,
You deceived me,
Thoughts come in my mind,
About me and you,
You left those memories in a state that cannot be erased,
Forever will no one replace,
They were too precious,
You broke my heart, thought you loved me from the very start
For you is infatuation, you found another
For me wasn’t, don’t want other
See the difference?
You don’t
One day you’ll realize I loved you, cared for you, trusted you
Its all down the drain and you put me through pain,
You won’t know because it ain’t happened to you.
I’m here trying to move on, trying to forget you
Doesn’t seem to happen,
I still think I’m in love with you.
These eyes don’t want to close,
These tears don’t have hopes,
This heart is strained with pain
Please, I don’t want to be hurt again
Just want to be left alone,
Thinking, wishing you was here
Thinking, wishing I could undo the feelings,
The time we spent with each other,
And the way u said the last goodbye… [comments] => 4 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 22 [informant] => saloni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

i thought u'd never leave me....

Contributed by saloni on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:47:36 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I thought u’d never leave me,
Talking about you,
You deceived me,
Thoughts come in my mind,
About me and you,
You left those memories in a state that cannot be erased,
Forever will no one replace,
They were too precious,
You broke my heart, thought you loved me from the very start
For you is infatuation, you found another
For me wasn’t, don’t want other
See the difference?
You don’t
One day you’ll realize I loved you, cared for you, trusted you
Its all down the drain and you put me through pain,
You won’t know because it ain’t happened to you.
I’m here trying to move on, trying to forget you
Doesn’t seem to happen,
I still think I’m in love with you.
These eyes don’t want to close,
These tears don’t have hopes,
This heart is strained with pain
Please, I don’t want to be hurt again
Just want to be left alone,
Thinking, wishing you was here
Thinking, wishing I could undo the feelings,
The time we spent with each other,
And the way u said the last goodbye…

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Re: i thought u'd never leave me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:59:53 AM AEST
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wow this is a very emotional and powerful write.. I really can relate to this in some parts.. I love the flow and great expression..

JENNITTUDE

Re: i thought u'd never leave me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:54:54 PM AEST
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Awesome! I love when reads give me chills and butterflies!

Re: i thought u'd never leave me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by one-curly-fry on Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 08:42:08 PM AEST
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This is a very powerful piece - very full of emotion. And I can relate. The girls I've loved, I hope one day they realize how much I offered and how much they wasted.
I too just don't want to be hurt again. I don't think I could have my feeling built up and smashed down again. I'm not that strong anymore.
Keep strong Saloni. Life will sort itself out - that's the faith I hold onto...

- Tim

Re: i thought u'd never leave me.... (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthie1983 on Saturday, 2nd December 2006 @ 12:19:22 PM AEST
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Oh wow, thanks for commenting on my poems, i definately can related to this one. Poetry is just filled with alot of emotions, i think it makes you strong once u share what you feeling. great work!!!

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