|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 124216
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => You always Near
[time] => 2006-08-08 10:34:07
[hometext] => Well its a down day today, hence the poem. Sue x
[bodytext] => When dark clouds hide the sun,
And my heart is broken in two,
When tragic events befall me,
I look up and I see you,
When tears from me they fall like rain,
And my mind is filled with fear,
When life is but a cross to bear,
I look round and see you near,
When circumstances make me mad,
And I have no place to hide,
And all the world seems against me,
I feel you, your at my side,
When I am tired and restless,
And I toss and turn in the night,
When nightmares haunt my mind,
I sense you, your holding me tight,
I see you when I am down,
I feel your love though we are apart,
Your my strength in all I do,
For you remain inside my heart
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 168
[topic] => 22
[informant] => jerseysue
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
)
You always Near
Contributed by
jerseysue
on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 10:34:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
When dark clouds hide the sun,
And my heart is broken in two,
When tragic events befall me,
I look up and I see you,
When tears from me they fall like rain,
And my mind is filled with fear,
When life is but a cross to bear,
I look round and see you near,
When circumstances make me mad,
And I have no place to hide,
And all the world seems against me,
I feel you, your at my side,
When I am tired and restless,
And I toss and turn in the night,
When nightmares haunt my mind,
I sense you, your holding me tight,
I see you when I am down,
I feel your love though we are apart,
Your my strength in all I do,
For you remain inside my heart
Copyright ©
jerseysue
... [
2006-08-08 10:34:07]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:47:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Sue, this is an excellently written poem. You've written it masterfully to be interpreted in any of three ways of address. A loved one lost to the Eternal, our Eternal God and Eternal Love. And the best part of all is they are One in any combination. At least, that's your cowboy buddy's read of this piece of Strength. |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:51:42 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I can truly identify with this write. Such a positive outlook to a situation such as it is...
Keep hanging in there, Sue...
Hugs
Jenni |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 01:30:15 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Awesome poem. Through thick and thin you still have something to hold on to. And though it may be far away you feel it so close. Too bad not everyone can have that kind of security in something. Even on down days you have something to look up on. Anyways, loved the poem. 5stars. |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 03:06:33 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a beautiful inspiration Sue.
Michelle |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 06:27:06 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
You did an amazing job with this. I can relate to this especially at this point in my life. You did a great job and I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep upi the great work..
Rich |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 09:54:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
My dearest Sue~ I know at times we feel down and things don't seem to go the way we want them to hun, but the comfort of knowing that He is near somehow makes it easier on the heart. Chin up my dear friend and know that I am here for you whenever u need me.
"In sickness or health,
In sufferring and pain,
In storm-laden skies,
In sunshine and rain,
God is always there
To lighten your way
And lead you through darkness
To a much brighter day"
Take care dearest Sue~
He is always with u my dear friend.
love, hugs n prayers,
sue m |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by guitarguy20 on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 10:50:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is one of the best poems i've read on here so far. Excellently written, I can tell it truely came from the heart. Hope you feel better, as time will heal all things. |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 03:21:53 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Thats lovely Sue and I agree exellent poem.. xxxx |
|
|
Re: You always Near
(User Rating: 1 )
by ATG on
Wednesday, 19th November 2008 @ 02:51:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| For me brings up the poem Desederata to mind, and the being at peace with God whatever you conceive him/it to be... I love that poem and allthough this seem to have a religious undertone (and I am not religious) I love this one also. Peace |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
