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I Bleed Because of You!
Contributed by
LeeLee
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Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 02:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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With This Blade
I Remove Your Hold On Me.
All That Ever Was You
Shall Pour Down My Wrists.
To You I Say Goodbye!
By Jess Hamilton
Copyright ©
LeeLee
... [
2006-08-08 02:55:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Bleed Because of You!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 03:48:13 AM AEST (User
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I like this.
I can relate.
After 4 years...
I thought about the same concept myself.
Instead imagined butchering "emotional" ties...metaphor..still effective.
Good work.
Sometimes less is more, and this is definately the case here.
Take care :) |
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Re: I Bleed Because of You!
(User Rating: 1 ) by hmverd on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 05:11:59 AM AEST (User
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It's good that you were able to convey your meaning through such a small amout of text.
While it's a fairly cliche topic, I really liked the original way you expressed it. Almost ritualistic. Good work :) |
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