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Array ( [sid] => 1242 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm leaving you now [time] => 2002-07-28 08:07:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Please don't hate me
I have to go far away
Your embrace is overwhelming
Don't you have anything to say?

Your face is blank
your eyes are stone-cold
I have to do this for my own sake
Before my heart grows old

I know you love me
But you love me far too much
I'm still just a little girl
I'm too immature for your touch

I thought by now
that time would erase
the tiny wrinkles of hurt
you've put on my face

I do not love you the same
or else I would long for you voice
But now that things are going the way they are
I really have no choice

I may not have the courage again
If I don't do this right away
Cause it'll just hurt me more
If I wait for a later day

So just hear me now
You'll always be near my heart
I just can't take it anymore
you're tearing me apart

You'll find someone better
someone who can understand
why you like to hurt other people
and can't take it like a man

I am going far away
a place where you can't reach me
Cause I'm sure if I don't leave you now
someday you will leave me

As surprising as it may seem
I can't let you go like that
I need to teach you a lesson
to learn to not act like a brat

I may be younger
but I have lived a longer life
in the sense that
you have caused me so much strife

I have to go now
don't tell me to call
don't walk me to the car
You'll just hit a brick wall

I've fallen out of love
I'm leaving for my own good
So just hide in your little world and start treating others like you should

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I'm leaving you now

Contributed by zeppchic420 on Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 08:07:23 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Please don't hate me
I have to go far away
Your embrace is overwhelming
Don't you have anything to say?

Your face is blank
your eyes are stone-cold
I have to do this for my own sake
Before my heart grows old

I know you love me
But you love me far too much
I'm still just a little girl
I'm too immature for your touch

I thought by now
that time would erase
the tiny wrinkles of hurt
you've put on my face

I do not love you the same
or else I would long for you voice
But now that things are going the way they are
I really have no choice

I may not have the courage again
If I don't do this right away
Cause it'll just hurt me more
If I wait for a later day

So just hear me now
You'll always be near my heart
I just can't take it anymore
you're tearing me apart

You'll find someone better
someone who can understand
why you like to hurt other people
and can't take it like a man

I am going far away
a place where you can't reach me
Cause I'm sure if I don't leave you now
someday you will leave me

As surprising as it may seem
I can't let you go like that
I need to teach you a lesson
to learn to not act like a brat

I may be younger
but I have lived a longer life
in the sense that
you have caused me so much strife

I have to go now
don't tell me to call
don't walk me to the car
You'll just hit a brick wall

I've fallen out of love
I'm leaving for my own good
So just hide in your little world and start treating others like you should





Copyright © zeppchic420 ... [ 2002-07-28 08:07:23]
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Re: I'm leaving you now (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissie on Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 04:32:58 PM AEST
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A very powerful piece and you convey your strong emotions very well...nicely written :)

Thank you for your very kind comment on " I Will Never Leave "
Chrissie


Re: I'm leaving you now (User Rating: 1 )
by inad on Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 11:56:54 AM AEST
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This is very powerful, and very heart touching, Its very deep, and stuff..




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