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A Day at the Ocean
Contributed by
yackerz85
on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 07:33:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Early in the morning before the sun shows.
You can feel the mist of the ocean as the wind blows.
Then, the sun throws off his cloak to reveal its light
and the water catches fire a bright pink breathaking sight.
In the bright noon sun the sand is hot and bright.
and the ocean waves crash and the seagulls take flight.
The sky is pure blue and not a cloud is to be seen.
and the ocean stretches beyond site with water bluish green.
In the evening darkness a cool breeze blows.
The sand is quite cool and feels good on the toes.
The shimmering ocean waters reflect the glossy white moon.
and the birds of the night sing a slow solemn tune
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yackerz85
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2006-08-07 19:33:13]
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Re: A Day at the Ocean
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 07:42:01 PM AEST
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| Thats a very nice image you put out. |
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Re: A Day at the Ocean
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 04:32:18 PM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean.... I live by the ocean...
Good imagery....
Jenni |
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Re: A Day at the Ocean
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Friday, 8th December 2006 @ 05:19:46 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem! EVerything flows so nicely and smooth. This really makes me wish I didn't live in Minnesota! |
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