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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Night at the Soccer Field
[time] => 2006-08-06 19:43:43
[hometext] => *This is the second poem in my human fantasy series. It comes after my poem 'Shopping Mall Dream.' If you haven't read it or commented on it, I'd appreciate some feedback. Feedback is also appreciated for this poem.
[bodytext] => Step out of my car and onto the gravel. Hear it crunch as you and I walk across it, to the abandoned soccer field. As we take our spot in the middle of the field, help me count the stars. We fall fast asleep in each others arms, and dream of each other, until I am awakened by a single raindrop. So I kiss you to wake you. As the rain begins to fall harder, you kiss me back. And say only four words. 'Make love to me.' So we do. With the thunder and lightning, as our copulating music. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 354 [topic] => 2 [informant] => thepizzaguy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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